| Reviews for Five Smashers at Freddy's |
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prowessMaster44 chapter 12 . 8/25/2017 Oh noooo Fox, you can't! DON'T DO IT. But it's too late... Now I know exactly what's going to happen next chapter, and I'm already feeling really scared for you, Fox... Also I do feel bad for Ike too, I mean, no one believes him! Not even Master Hand! (...well, we don't know for sure since Master Hand wouldn't even give Ike any time to explain before hanging up) OHMYGOSH. XDD BEST PART: THE REBUILDING OF THE SMASH MANSION BY NESS AND ROY. XDDD Goodness, I was snorting and snickering so much reading that part. First was when Lucas took his walk and came around to see that the mansion was already rebuilt!... ...for it to be a painting instead. xDD I guess the part which killed me most was the detail where the painting fell over to reveal a small heap of bricks, and the painted door on the bricks was just the icing on the cake. Brilliant. Of course Dark Pit and Captain Falcon would resort to flattery to choose Fox for the night shift. Speaking of which... FOX, I'M STILL SCARED FOR YOU! |
Jyoster chapter 12 . 8/17/2017 Well, here come another night on another unfortunate soul. |
rubysaphire1 chapter 4 . 8/12/2017 You this is amazing I'm a real fan of fear and super smash bros and I loved this slot the especially the part with balloon boy cuz balloon boy is my favorite animatronic that part made me never wanna stop reading so yeah I'm be up for a while bravo |
deadaccounte chapter 1 . 7/20/2017 THE CAKE IS A LIE |
prowessMaster44 chapter 11 . 7/4/2017 Right off the bat I feel bad for Ike because Fox and Pit just had to somewhat force him into the job... xD But the creeps start rolling in with that freakishly sketchy phone call...It starts out fine, but I like how the conversation gradually shifts to a more messed up convo, and you can totally sense Ike's confusion and slight fear. Oh geez..he really doesn't know what's coming for him! "...he switched to the Supply Closet, which was nothing of importance either since he wasn't a fan of tile floors being the star of the camera feed." XDDD OHMYGOSH, THAT'S HILARIOUS. BRILLIANT. I LOVE IT. And of course Ike would steal stuff from the kitchen when hungry if he's not a guard man. Of course. xDDD NO BONNIE. NO CHICA. NONONONO. STAY WHERE YOU ARE. I'M WITH YOU, IKE. HIDE UNDER THAT DESK WITH ME (also again, typical Ike move). Geez, it's getting REALLY creepy now... I legit went to another room with another human being in it since being alone while reading this doesn't feel quite...safe. But I WOULD LITERALLY SHRIEK MY GUTS OUT IF I SAW BONNIE STARING AT ME LIKE THAT. I DON'T BLAME YOU IKE. YOU REACTED MUCH BETTER THAN I WOULD'VE. But can I just say I love how Ike just rolls off a bunch of nonsense towards them even though they probably can't hear anything? xD That's what I really like about this chapter-the balance of humor and horror. It's super well balanced, and it makes me laugh when it's supposed to, but it doesn't sacrifice the horror parts of it, since I AM legit spooked about now. And of course, by typical Ike fashion, Ike claims he has bested them all but faints before he finishes his sentence. xDDDD LOVE IT! |
Jyoster chapter 11 . 7/3/2017 Looks like Ike will be just as traumatized as Samus. Also, it's going to be funny when Fox get to see Foxy. |
prowessMaster44 chapter 10 . 4/2/2017 I'm all for Samus destroying the place. That place definitely doesn't give the best experiences to anyone... But I mean, Samus is insistent on destroying the place, and even though I'm all for it, she's so hilarious. xDDDDD Man, I love her to bits. (Ah, I just gotta remember NOT to get on her bad side...) Oh goodness...CREEP GALORE... That's so creepy how a new Freddy Fazbear's pizzeria opened up someplace else that's different than what our first group of Smashers encountered... PIT! DARK PIT! CAPTAIN FALCON! IKE! FOX! GTFO! NOOOOOOOOOO! YOU CAN'T GOOOO THERE! Awww I seriously want to scream Marth's warning at them that the place was filled with killer animatronics, but it was so creepy how their call cut off right there before he could say those words. Goodness...it gave me the chills when the group got to the new pizzeria. Man that worker though...he was definitely NOT joking when he said 'don't get killed because that would suck...' "...while far behind was someone holding a plushie of a purple bunny rabbit." I'M OUT. GAAAH THIS IS SOO CREEPY. (which is a good thing) ...but I"m probably going to come back since this is getting TOO GOOD... |
deadaccounte chapter 2 . 3/12/2017 I love how Samus is like It'll be a piece if cake then actually does the job and is basically OH GAWD PLEEZE NO DON'T MAKE ME GO BAK |
deadaccounte chapter 1 . 3/9/2017 THE CAKE IS MINE! |
prowessMaster44 chapter 9 . 1/17/2017 I just love the good balance between horror and humor. xDD Poor Cloud...he doesn't know what he's gotten into, both the next shift of that night AND a Smasher of the Smash mansion (well, let's all agree that being in the Smash mansion is more horrifying than a night at Freddy Fazbear's pizzeria...) THE HORROR. My goodness. I know I told you several times, but you capture the horror very well. Maybe it's because I'm easily affected by anything remotely creepy, but it really impresses me how much this gives me the heebie-jeebies (which is good!). Cloud's a tough guy but I can tell that he's slightly unsettled once he realized those animatronics weren't where the used to be... And I literally cowered deeper in my blankets when reading Cloud's near-death from animatronics. Thank goodness that there was just enough time, and thank goodness for Samus, since I can't wait til she blows up the place. xD Also, Cloud, I agree with Marth - go have a cup of coffee (or two, or three, or four, or five...) xD |
Ultimate SMS Fan chapter 9 . 1/13/2017 Could someone stop Samus before she destroy the restaurant, please? |
Ultimate SMS Fan chapter 3 . 1/13/2017 battlefield4us, do you play Sister Location? It have the origins of the purple guy (Michael Afton), who is son of William Afton (light pinkish-purple), owner of Afton Robotics and Circus Baby's Pizza World. I really recommend you watch the gameplay and cutscenes of Sister Location, including custom night too. You may find out the real truth that Michael Afton (Purple Guy) is not killer, the real murder is William Afton (who be depressed by the death of his daughter after Circus Baby malfunction and drags her with a claw on her stomach accident). I hope you understand the following events. |
jdstudios777 chapter 8 . 12/7/2016 What about SMG4?! |
DragonGod376 chapter 8 . 7/8/2016 Are coming back to this story it's a really good story |
DragonGod376 chapter 6 . 6/5/2016 YAY DRAGON BALL Z REFERENCE hopefully |