NO I AM THE SPIDER QUEEN NOT ELISE I LUV SPIDERS

I rather like this Ashe/Tryndamere. I normally write Ashe as submissive and timid in my works, but you make her quite the seductress here. Two thumbs up.

As for suggestions, how about a Leona/Lux? I'll PM you a synopsis for how you could structure it.

Not revealing he has a dead wife...good going Lucian. That's some black magic right there.

Jarvan x Irelia , we need more of that mate.

Wow. This one is extremely good compared to your previous works for some reason.

Can you possibly write a Riven x Yasuo lemon please? :D

Can you do Jarvan x Shyvana next please? Pls pls pls pls pls

Ah, thank you for complying to my request. The lemon was pretty good, but still a bit lacking in the department of detail and tension. Where is the tension before it breaks? The smells, the sound, the feeling? For example, the silent breaths rushing through Sona's lips as Lee wantonly thrusts into her heated core. It's heat as it wisps on his skin, maybe even the pinch of her teeth against his skin.

But anyway, your lemons are fine, if not better than most. All you need to work on is more distinct imagery and more...intimacy?

Another suggestion is that you should try more unorthodox pairings, although this is more of a personal preference. Like, you've been using standard pairings throughout. Try more risky ones. For example, everyone ships Sona and Lee. What if you made her seduce Tryndamere into cheating on Ashe? The tension is resistance is then simple to execute. Try to be more creative with pairings. There are more than enough stories about KatxGaren, AshexTrynd, etc.

Looking forward to your improvement.

Excelsior!

Brilliant. I'd like to see these kinds of lemons. Very well done sir.