So perfect

This was a great one-shot because even though it was not shown this much in Pahkitew Island, we should've seen more of Shawn freaking out since it was mainly a part of his character that wasn't seen a lot when he was near Jasmine, I loved the little bit about Jasmine's shop and the freaking out part was also a nice touch. This seemed like a pretty good story which I'd probably think would be the perfect example if a rookie like me was trying to see how people wrote.

I was expecting Amanda to write both fics, but I guess you guys decided to split the work load, ha ha! Either way, this was so so amazing!

There were so many radical parts, like the violent Canadian stereotype of a man, Shawn's paranoia, even the name of the flower/cage fighting shop (which is awesome, since it's continuity in favor of the American ending with Shawn winning). I especially love the part where Jasmine reads Shawn's note, because it's the perfect amount of shippiness for those two!

All in all, wonderful job. Thanks so much for writing it!