Ignore A Shyguy. Doesn't seem like he actually put much thought into it. Like how the hell is Lord Emon alive from such a long distance past. No way. And besides, the story just started, there won't be much detail to begin with. Please continue with the story. I'm very curious about it(though some parts are kinda obvious, like the colossus, the temple, and the sword, eventually.)

As honestly as I can put it, when you read between the lines, it's just an overglorified story of good intentions turning into more idiocy and even hints of malice. First, half-truths. Dormin didn't mention any of the colossi, which did jack-s*** other than moving and usual bulls***, and then Dormin ordered Wander to kill all sixteen. Also, why did Dormin not mention Lord Emon, just humans in general? Was he the only truly evil one and Dormin thought that all other humans are evil? Or was he a good one Dormin "forgot" to mention? I doubt that horns make you evil (I'm certain that three of the colossi have them), nor does being jet black (Bullet bills don't attack until the Galaxy series, when they were pissed at the murderous plumber), but Dormin is not good. Malicious, no, but far from good. And finally, he never explained why Wander's reincarnation has horns. He just said so. It could possibly be him avoiding blame. As for the hate speech, that's the big lie. Tell it enough, it becomes truth in normal people's eyes. Humans are weird. When others are hurt by other humans (not pain in general), there is probably not going to be joy out of bloodlust. Instead, hate towards the murderer. Also, even serial killers could have friends. Dormin also is depicted as an over-glorified night. You realize that Majora used a moon, symbolic of night, as a weapon of mass-screw it. It's another lie.

Nice try in shading Dormin as not evil, but all I see is actual bulls*** and Dormin being oblivious a bit. However, you will improve at propaganda. That doesn't mean that you'll have a facist-like group by the end of the year. Keep brainwashing, unless it's Shroobs. Trust me, you don't want to mess with their heads.

reminds me of biblle