Reviews for Camp Time, Kill Time |
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![]() ![]() Sorry but it was boring is was ok I guess but you have great potentia,l but this it's just, just...boring. Sorry if I seem mean mate |
![]() ![]() shit Im becoming more concious of the fact that kuro-sensei wants is to take care of them and let them have fun and return he accepts they will kill him...for the good of everyone |
![]() ![]() Yea, I think this fic would be better without pairings, so that everyone can read it and not go 'eww I don't ship it' because personaly I ship karma x Nagisa, and I hate kayano (dunno why...) |
![]() ![]() Holy shit I'm psyched for this omg |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly, from your description, i expected the secrets to play a bigger part in the story. And be more than one... |
![]() ![]() ![]() YOU'RE MAKING ME WORRY SO MUCH! What's going to happen to everybody?! Something horrible, drastic, sad?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kidnapped Nagisa, my favourite! but the rescue was a bit unrealistic. Nagisa was kidnapped around 8:45, but the others noticed it not until at least 20 min later. Normally they wouldn't be able to get to that island in time. But I see why you did that. Good story overall. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this! I love how you brought Takaoka into it and Kidnapped Nagisa! I am so glad I found this! Thank you for finishing this |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love it i hope you continue |
![]() ![]() You're story is great no seriously there may be a hint of OOC'ness but it was like I was watching an actual episode (by the way I have read this till chapter 18 meaning I've read till the end) you're other stories are also wonderful keep up the good work and please don't abandon a story |
![]() ![]() Assassination start... Omgawsh is SAO! |
![]() ![]() I liked it. The ride was enjoyable. The only criticism that I have is you should use more descriptive words. You know 'show don't tell'. Either way, thank you for writing the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing~~ |
![]() ![]() You wrote this story too?! Why are they all so amazing?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing! I love it a lot! |