I LOVE IT!
PERFECT*-*
AMAZING*-*
CUTE*-*
AHHHH
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Awwwwwwwwwwww!

Well,.good idea, i like how describe the scene. But! That all about son and so just feels weird. How is possible, that his son is real, when they slept together in an ilusion? It simply has a lot of logical mistakes. Every magic has its cost, doesn't it? So the boys definitely should not be real. And there are more suspicious things than that. Next time you have to do the
world more specific, you have to change their world to make this kind of stuff real or you have to play it long the rules of Constantine's world.

Interesting story line. There was a few typos here and there, but still worth the read. I would have preferred that whole one chapter to be broken up into multiple ones, but I liked it none the less. :)