Reviews for The Date
teacuppy chapter 1 . 6/8/2015
Never have my heart been broken more rapidly than reading while this... beautifully devastating.

you're good writer.
codename.penguin chapter 1 . 3/2/2015
loved it! So much angst.
theartstudentyouhate chapter 1 . 3/1/2015
This hurts so much even though I know that they have a happy ending.
Raeya chapter 1 . 3/1/2015
Ah poor boys.
TheReturned chapter 1 . 2/28/2015
Wow, even having read the end companion piece, this still made me feel so sad. Excellent work :)
sweetmarly chapter 1 . 2/28/2015
The perfection of this is the paragraph where in the moment of complete shock and disbelief he can recount exactly every little nuance around him. All his senses come alive and he registers everything subconsciously. For days, months, years he will remember exactly where he was and what he was doing the exact moment Sherlock walked in. Then he goes home and sits on his bed, rigid, with thoughts of the ramifications of this event. Shock does that and this is brilliant psychology on your part.

aka TGTBT
leetah.evee chapter 1 . 2/26/2015
I know how this ends... it doesn't make me any happier.

An all tan Sherlock with little spectacles does though.
LithiumStar chapter 1 . 2/26/2015
Oh my god... FINALLY...
I was craving to read this chapter more than The Apology itself!
This is quite what I would have imagined... except for the kiss! You took me by surprise!
Naika's Thoughts chapter 1 . 2/25/2015
I.. Wow. Good thing we already know the future, but even then... Ouch.
Starlight05 chapter 1 . 2/25/2015
Ouch.
Great job! My heart rate steadily increased until Sherlock walked in oh gosh that was suprisingly suspenseful even though I knew what was coming. Sherlock's expression of shock though... Poor baby... I need to go reread The Apology haha.
Also I want Japanese food now.
Maryportia chapter 1 . 2/25/2015
I am totally gutted for them all over again. But still it's great to see what actually happened. Thanks :)
Marcia santos chapter 1 . 2/25/2015
That was good I was curious to know how was their 1st meeting.
Suealpacamama chapter 1 . 2/25/2015
I am glad you gave us this...I missed it. And I like the 3rd person narrator for this chapter. Since your summary didn't indicate this was "complete", I am looking forward to the next chapter. :)
FyreQuill chapter 1 . 2/25/2015
Well done! This is a great companion piece. I like how you handled the first meeting.
jaimi-or-jaemi chapter 1 . 2/25/2015
Oh that's so very horrid for the both of them cause I can just imagine how Sherlock is feeling when he gets back to wherever he is staying