Looks like you gave up on the story... Idk man, but this was a good one. In the end, there was no part two for the cliffhanger that you gave.

Have I mentioned I want part two?

wait, what? oh.. well,

bwahaha!.. i see what you did there, too make it even. and yeah, even tho this is erotic enough and some people enjoyed it, its still odd that Vivi have such a weak will. lmao, but this still good anyway,

this is kinda nice, but damn!.. you ruined a good LuVi material from the first chapter. i mean, its good what happened in chapter one, but.. well, who am i too judge this much, lol

damn! always love some LuffyxVivi smut!... this is great,
to bad its a harem genres not some 'drama', lmao.

Need more!

Do one with Hancock and Robin(using her clones)

I strangely enjoyed this

Awesome return chapter! Really looking forward part two. Just seeing Luffy and Carrot discovering sex with each other is equal parts cute, endearing, and sexy. I wish you happy holidays.

do one with Robin, Luffy and Nami

Nico Robin

Fuck yea do more Robin, your work is amazing

I would like to see Robin and Hancock do it with like
Luffy

Hot!