Nice story wish you would continue this story

To add more to my previous review since I don’t want anyone to say I’m flaming you. All I’m saying is that too much information at times is not good for the story.

Oh god I cringed for most of the chapter, soooo overdramatic at times where it was not needed, not to mention that you explain every little thing that I honestly skipped most of the chapter. not saying that ur story is bad just that holy shit dude it’s hard to read. Not sure why I’m been writing a review this story is clearly abandoned.

Too bad you never continued this. It has the framework for an excellent story!

Hopefully you decide to continue writing at some point :)

This would be really fucking good if you continued it

You have put so much into just the first two chapters I hope you are going to be writing more. I have really enjoyed this story so far!

read the first chapter so far and I like it but you say paramour WAY too much

is this story over

Interesting story and looking forward to seeing Percy grow into a Campione and learn his Authorities (which sound badass by the way).

Also, can't wait to see him fight other heretic gods and who the other Campione will be.

nice work hope we see this and your other works updated soon!

Bigger is always better.

this story is Wearing thin.

half of this was like gujaboetnn look at this Sex time dsabgjdasb jkli look at that! Lust over that!

God this info dump went on and on and on.

This is an excellent start. I hope you continue thus story as well as the HP/Campione companion piece. You're a great writer and do a wonderful job of drawing readers into your stories, so it's a shame that you seem to be abandoning such promising stories indefinitely.