that was good keep the chapters coming

I really liked the 'council meeting' :)

you might want to exchange the story cover pictures. This one u used on the story suits it very well. The other one on the new story... not so much.

Thanks for giving us the heads up. Looking forward to hanyou protagonist.

I really like this fic, and if you are rewriting it I woud like a new version, not swapping.
Thanks.

It reminsd me so much os "A drop of poison". I love it, especially since it's SI and your writing is good.
I'm concerned about how rape incident influences her and her relationships.
Thanks for writing!

i would like to have it posted as a new story if just to make it easier to tell when it is updated

love the half demon idea, no ever dose that any more, 2nd i don't like the idea of her have any overpowered eyes. i don't like eyes in naruto, too powerful. 3rd you are going bit too fast i would take 3 more ch on back ground then do the academy, 5ch for the academy, or more and go from there with maybe a time skip in-till the bridge mission. Also the works out well for a Haku x oc fic... if you want... or do have some else in mind?

night, its 2 am for me... zzzz

Just reposting over them should be good as long as you let your readers know.

God I love this story. As for how you should handle the rewrite, ehh, its up to you. I think just posting over it would be fine. Whatever is easiest for you tbh

I like this version so please post a new version to preserve this one.

Please post as new chapters on this story It would be nice to see how you have progressed as a writer and what you have changed.

A new one so that we can read it through

If you've gone through the effort of rewriting them might as well post them over the original, unless you want to leave the original in , place as a reminder or something.

NEW VERSION