The scenery at the beginning was absolutely vivid and beautiful. Well done as far as the writing goes! Gah! I loved that opening. But gah! I really feel for Hazelyn dealing with the loss of her child. Our poor girl. And then Robb. They're both trying to deal with it, but it's not there is an instruction manual for grief.

Hold on, Tallmadge wants to add something: hy6B N !QX (I'll let you interpret that haha)

And Myna. Oh, Myna. Crazy timing.

Also, I always forget this is at the beginning of GoT...I've seen this episode, but not much more.
haha.

Thanks for taking the time to write this! Love ya! Kudos! :)

Great chapter

Hazel should tell about Bran's fall, she has kept quite and it has done her no good. Attempts have been made at her life, Bran's life and staying quite to protect others will be just stupid now. I also want this to happen because I can't read another same predictable war of the 5 kings (Tyrion comes to Winterfell, Robb gets angry at him, oc doesn't, oc gets angry at Robb. Cat kidnaps Tyrion, war starts, Ned dies Jaime gets captured but can't be killed and so on - it's always the same). Having told about what she heard would prevent tyrion's kidnapping and change things up else even the whole -'she knows' seems kinda pointless.

A lot of new characters thrown at me there but I enjoyed it regardless. The writing is top notch though I'm itching to have her meet the Starks already.

An interesting beginning but what will you do with this story I wonder?

Hey! Wow, this is great timing for a post, can’t wait for more. ;)
Hazelyn is such a dynamic character, she has so many ways of showing herself it’s something hard to tell which is her being her real self. I feel like Robb is seeing just that, He is definitely aware that she can be cold and unfeeling and it clearly bothers him that Hazelyn won’t acknowledge their lost son more and is quick to start an argument, but he is just as quick to redeem her actions by reminding himself of her warmer actions. He seems hung up on doing this in fact and I wonder How much more he can take. Hazelyn has often seemed like she Is the good girl but I can’t help but remember where she comes from. As for Myna this has been my favorite scenes of her, she is so fierce yet she cracks me up. AhHa, Theon tried so hard. Ohhh and what is this about her and Jon and wait, a baby!? The ending scene was perfect! I hope you update soon like you said ;)

Wait has she told them
it was Cersei who poisoned her
and caused their son to die

Hazelyn, it is good that you talk to Robb so that he understands that he faces your pain, in a different way than him, but even if you do not show it, you are very hurt by the death of your son; Being close to Robb will help you overcome this pain. Remember Hazelyn that it was what you saw, that you gave birth early so you will discover that Bran was hurt for seeing treason; Hazelyn it's good that you both lean on Robb and you can eventually get pregnant again when the time is right. Howland Reed if he really appreciated Lyanna for what he did for you, then be a damn man and break your promise to Ned; because when your son the green seer tells you that Ned Stark's bastard is going to have a child. You will know that the truth cannot be hidden, because that baby or babies can be born with the Targaryen traits and the truth will be exposed; you must go to the wall to tell the truth to Jon he deserves to know his true origin and his son.

Your best chapter yet, strangely enough... I hate Theon yet for the first time, in any story I saw a flash of... something more than cowardly slime there, interesting, you ought to develop him some more. Some changes from canon can be good I suppose, on certain minor points and larger ones. Heck, if he ends up resisting and dying to the Ironborn, there would be a good change right there.
Your best point, would be how you've written Robb, Cat & Hazel this chapter, which marked it leagues above all other fanfics of got here on fanfiction. You have a natural knack for drama between three loving individuals, please do update again soon, perhaps at the end of the next month or something.

One last thing; stay safe as your health is important like that of the rest of the world. Once again, your best chapter yet, you should be very proud, as I've not had to give such high praise to any story in almost a year.

Ooh I'm so excited about Robb and Hazelyn's baby, not to mention Myna and Jon's blossoming relationship gives me life. But Theon ugh he's so...Theon.

Oh shit Myna is pregnant! I dare say Hazel is becoming more and more like a Bolton

great to have you back!
i think the way you portray robb and hazel grief and their coping is perfect but also heart rending
looking forward for more and i wonder is robb going be more ruthless in the WOT5K? executing lannister prisioners in revenge for his baby?

Yay, welcome back! This chapter was great, and so long! So many things happened i don't know where to start. I can't believe that Myna might be pregnant. If it's true that is going to be seriously awkward for Hazel. She has just lost her child and now has to witness her best friend going through what she wished she still had.

The dream in the beginning was super intriguing - who was in the cloak?

Poor Robb and Hazelyn... both of them are dealing with the loss of their children in their own way, but I'm so glad they've reached a compromise and have started to heal together.

Hazel definitely cracked a bit at the end there, but I like that she and Catelyn are going through something similar and they recognize that.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I wonder if Hazelyn will tell them about the moon tea once they start to suspect the Lannisters for Bran's fall. Keep up the great work!

Awesome update :)

It is always nice to read a new chapter of this story. I think this story is incredible. The loss of Robb and Hazel's baby was a serious blow, and you have described this passage of their story very well. The ending of this chapter was explosive! Good job!