sorry about your friend.

other than that, it's an interesting take - if i remember correctly japan does not support lgbt, so it's possible, i suppose.

some things that irked me a lot though - every sentence in the story is either a dialogue, song lyric, or their thoughts. you have a good idea, but you need to flesh out the events properly. describe what happens, create visual images, more clues than just dialogue. also, to see song lyrics every few lines is incredibly irritating. people come here to read fanfiction, not song lyrics. if they wanted song lyrics, there are proper websites for that. if you still want to include the song, you could instead suggest to readers to listen to it while reading, or simply insert the most relevant lines/verse at the front/back. either that, or you lengthen it. you do not realise how annoying it is to see so many song lyrics everywhere. i didn't come here for lyrics, even if some lines are relevant.

this could use some work.

Please!Continue this story...i am super curious as to how it will end...and please let it end THE MITSU Wayyyyy...
And sorry for your loss.I really dont know whats wrong with people..They should just let people be, the way they want to be..And stop regretting and instead help the other LGBT's to make your friend smile at you from wherever he is now.

i read this whl lstening 2 d'song 4 10x alrdy but i just cant get engh of it XD its short but so deep. haha i evn bought ed's album X aftr that n i luv all d'songs! btw i can rlate to ur story bout ur friend cuz many suicides in my country hppen cuz sexuality problems ( fyi my sis is a psychlgst so i know some real cases ) i also heard in some countries its even known as mental disorders, how cruel! hwever in thai the govnment finally give rspect to LGBT by acknwldge the 3rd gender this year. well engh wit chit-chat, i 3 this, so just give mitsu hpy endg alrdy! P/S whos ritsus gf? its oc or mugi? btw i also luv big bang theory, u know, i call no mee-maw!

UPDATE! This is really a good one, I mean seriously, it almost made me cry, I hope you'll continue this one

So... They're not together after all...
This story...made me cry...why? This story related to me in so many ways right now...

Thanks for this story :)
I wont criticize any grammars or errors since I'm suck at that... but you know, as I read this story, I kept getting this annoyed feeling... the chaos started when Mio denies her feelings and indirectly saying that she's 'straight' which causes Ritsu to feel hopeless to the extent of burying her feelings forever... While Mio, regretting everything since she thinks people 'expectations' are more important than herself being 'happy' - ahh... it's SO SAD! :( They both hurting each other's feelings without knowing a tiny bit truth.

Again, thanks... and I am sorry for your loss :( may your friend rest in peace :)
Oh, since you mention TiAom and Mike - I do know them since my soon-to-be-ex-girlfriend likes TiAom so much and yeah... I don't really like "Mike" - yeah yeah, we all know WHY :D

I support this to have more chapter, BUT only IF there will be Mitsu romance possibilities :D I dont think I can handle any more Mitsu with hopeless happy ending :(

sorry bout ur pal, still... luv this story and the song too, so plz continue!