Discord huh? How fitting

U have my my life sad

*gasped in horror *

Real shame I liked this story but alas it your story so you can do what you like.

Good luck with your future

Eyeless Zack

You know I've been following this story since it's beginnings on my old account in summer of 2015 and I'm still in love with it. Now I write my own fabrics and I can understand why you are doing this. We all lose stamina in a story and I hope you cone back to it.

These things happen. Maybe one day you will find inspiration. I enjoyed the read and hope to read other fanfics you come out with. _

hiya its been a while I had no idea you updated three chapters since I last read it lol. So I played catch up. And as before this is still my favorite fanfic! I cant wait for 25 to come out. I hope things get better at home for you.

Rereading this again, it's still awesome. This is maybe the 3rd or 4th re-read in the past weeks. I love this kind of spin on man. good luck with balancing writing and your life.

*grins* Is that Final Fantasy reference that I hear? ~

That's the way Tim! If you're upset at anything or anyone~ EAT THEM! And Author-san... I want to do a mass massacre to the Black Order for what they did to Allen! How dare they! *there is apocalypse happening that she is imagining*

OMG I love this book its so damn interesting. Could u like add dark momments of Allen so for example: Allen catches someone from the black order and brings them home to interrogate, they tie him and lock him up but than Allen goes there for whatever reason and the prisoner says something that makes him snap like "u r unwanted"or "we'll kill all ur family". Allen gets mad and starts torturing him and one of his family member comes and sees a very gory scene.
Sorry for rambling :)(

nice chapter

And I can guess that the 'small bookstore' is the secret base of the Black Order. Can't wait to read what happens next.

Aww poor Allen he needs more sleep

I like it a lot!