This was beautiful, I loved the style of writing.

very good!

This was beautifully written

Beautiful

Beautiful, stunning, poetry in motion.

You handled a difficult topic beautifully

Incredibly authentic! I loved the wording "Panic shakes the room like a snow globegave me goose bumps! The entire scene is just heartbreaking! Maura's fear was so intense and practically palpable! I can only imagine how terrified she must've been

So powerful, this is not easy and body image issues is so difficult at times to work with. The self loath runs so deep. Thank you for sharing this story...it's sad, loving and deep!

No matter what happens between these two their love shines through. You write Jane & Maura so well and have a way to make their love for one another glow like a beacon drawing them to each others shore. Bringing them safely home no matter how rough the seas traveled may have been. Thank you for sharing.

This is so beautiful and I totally relate to Maura in this one... So hauntingly sad. Jane is wonderful. I love their love. I love how you write their love. Always.

*strangled cry as my heart is wrenched from my chest*

Wow! Your writing is just amazing - so raw and tender. You are such a talented writer I never tire of reading and re-reading your work. Your empathy with the characters and your ability to express it so beautifully is just incredible. Your use of words is impeccable - absolutely wonderful!

Your fics are by far some of my favorites, out of any fandom I have ever read. Hell, I like your fics more than about half the books I've read. Your writing style is so poignant and stylistic, but has a captivating simplicity and poetry to is that is just so powerful. You have such a way of writing with emotion and getting into Jane and Maura's heads and it makes so much sense. You fully comprehend exactly what will fit alongside and into the actions of each character, and I absolutely love it. Your fics always pack a punch to me, this one in particular because I found it when I was going through severe body issues, just like Maura. And this fic, it helped me. Reassured me that I wasn't as disgusting as I found my body. You flesh these charcters into humans, and along with amazing and inventive ideas. I will never get over how much I love your writing, your stories. Sorry for the long review. I just love your writing so much, that's what I'm trying to say. I appreciate in full the effort you put into your fics, and I will continue to re-read every single one of them like I would re-read books. The work you put in is likely enormous, and I appreciate it so very much. Please, never stop writing. You're amazing.

Wow. I really am not sure what else I could say to that. Except WOW!

Another beautiful piece of writing, but now I need something a bit lighter to balance things out.