please come back we miss you

Love what you're doing here; it's good to see that you're still writing stories after all these years! Keep it up man!

-BTTM

Good to see you back! Did you look at my review from the last chapter?

You've done it again you madman I'm loving this story as always

I only have two issues from what's otherwise fantastic. I think the others should've realized by now that Francesca and Nanako are the same person, especially since in this chapter she slips up multiple times and even outright says "I" before correcting herself. Despite this no one seems to be suspicious which is a little off-putting because at this point at least one of the three would be perceptive enough to catch that I think. This can easily be remedied by either removing or changing around those slip ups or having her be confronted on them.

The last thing is that there seemed to be too much back and forth between Lynne screwing up and getting put down for it, and then the next scene is that criticism automatically getting redacted only to be given again. I think this should be solidified into a small series of mistakes followed by one redeeming scene that then gets her back compliments. It was clear that she's supposed to be displayed as still having great fears that interfere with her will, but the kind of ping pong she was playing with Erica and Perrine in showing that here felt confusing and immersion breaking.

Other than that I fucking need more, been following this for years and that's what I'll keep doin

Hey, do you think you can have Perinne's eyesight restored because I think she looks better without glasses!

I actually binge reading book one and book two of this fic couple months ago (when looking for Eila fic) and I just want to say that this fic and the previous are AWESOME! XD

Fan of Eilanya and fic with many words in a single chapter.
Love the plot
And the fact Eila so badass is a plus :)

Sorry for not reviewing the previous chapters
Update Soon

PINCH ME I THINK IM DREAMING ITS A NEW CHAPTER YES YES YES I LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT IT

Well keep working on it this was worth the wait. I know all about real life getting in the way. This is getting interesting. looking forward to the next section.

I'm reading, and it's worth the wait. Ever. Time. :)

When are you gonna update?

Another badass chapter man, just what I would expect from you. The lack of Lucchini made me a little sad but that's just cuz she's my fave, I cannot get over this thickening plot shits about to get real. My condolences to your friend too, may they feel better especially with a friend like you. I'm still sticking to this ride till the end!

Well then, things are forming up for an epic battle, Aurora will turned against her allies for one last fight, one i for one will be in the edge of my seat to see...

I must say this is a fascinating exploration of personalities I am looking forward to seeing more of this.

Nice, Character devlopment all around, not alot else to say though.
That's not a bad thing though.

Not bad, i think Arrora would look great in a dress...sorry, my mind went to a naughty Place for a second there, anyway