| Reviews for Journey: Rise of the White Wolf |
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   Argus456 chapter 5 . 7/16 The victory dance and Nora joining in...pfft hahaha! |
| Kishinakutskikronoslvl78killa chapter 28 . 5/8 Love your writing, love the story. When you can keep it going! |
| Tellemicus Sundance chapter 1 . 4/5 I want to say that I'm angry at you for following the ALL-TOO-COMMON trope of making Jaune into a badass Faunus of some kind. But, honestly at this point, I'm just too tired and disappointed of it to care anymore. Couldn't you have written this story with Jaune being more of a lone wolf in a metaphorical sense than a literal one? I mean, even just changing Pyrrha to leader as you did here could've made a somewhat interesting story than reusing such an annoyingly common trope. |
| FrostyChops chapter 1 . 1/9 Oof, seems like quite a bit of edge going on here, not sure I'm a fan :/ But those that like that kind of stuff will probably like this, seems well written so far |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/9/2019 Rereading the story again, wished you would continue it |
| 246vili chapter 4 . 1/20/2019 More Arc family secrets for Pyrrha to learn if she's lucky. Also curious to find out who is the other faunus from her past. The White Fang attacking a lab in a place that is called "the city of the Faunus" is quite contradictory considering what they claim of doing. |
| Rakkis3059 chapter 28 . 11/23/2018 Great update. I love this story so much. I hope for another arkos date chapter soon. |
| Reader Joe chapter 28 . 11/18/2018 You forgot to include Qrow X Grain Alcohol in the pairing list. |
| Basket in a Nutcase chapter 1 . 11/4/2018 me: *hasn't even read the chapter yet* also me: *kicks down door* ~WAKE THE WHITE WOLF AT THE DAWN OF WAR, THE END OF THE AGE IS A-COMIN NOW~ |
| Mattpell02 chapter 28 . 11/4/2018 The creature is the hide behind from gravity falls |
| merendinoemiliano chapter 21 . 11/3/2018 Regarding the Thunderbird i tought it came from north american mythology. |
| merendinoemiliano chapter 28 . 11/3/2018 Very good and funny chapter, can't wait for nexts. |
| shelwyn chapter 5 . 9/16/2018 Wow John with Neo? Gross man that cradle robber grandpa John is going for some teen or very young woman? Lmao... Also though that Ram faubus was done for lol. Since you strangely introduced someone and gave him a personal back story to the MC family and he was going to go home after deployment in another city I thought he was dead for sure. |
| shelwyn chapter 4 . 9/15/2018 Ah Salem what's up |
| shelwyn chapter 3 . 9/15/2018 Weiss X Neptune Nah he screws it up at the dance so meh no just for a little bit. Yang X Blake Nah Blake didn't accept a girl in Ily or whatever and dates that bull instead haha |
