Reviews for Puppy Love
Phanstarlight chapter 1 . 7/31/2017
Awwwh this was a really sweet little story :D
Tie-Dyed Broadway chapter 6 . 10/4/2015
Have you ever read “A Dog's Purpose”? It's one of my favorites, and the writing style is similar.
Happynomnom chapter 6 . 4/1/2015
Oh my gosh yes yes yes that was adorable and that was exactly what I was imagining! THANKS! :DDD "Geollofley!" oh my god I completely lost it there… loved it!
DaniMae chapter 5 . 3/24/2015
This is such a sweet story. _ Can't wait for another update.
123Books chapter 5 . 3/17/2015
Great Update!
Questions though:
How does he open a refrigerator? It's confusing. I feel like it would be better to explain in this chapter than the next. Would it be better if it was on the counter?
Could it go like this:
Geoffrey wasn't sure why Merlin looked at him so funny. He didn't change, did he? He was still Merlin's bestest best friend.
Merlin could only stare at Geoffrey in horror.
(Not sure what kind of dog Geoffrey is)
His beloved dog had turned so fat. His stomach bulged, touching the ground, and he was panting harder than usually.
Merlin glared at Galahad.
"Really? I leave you with him for /five/ days." He rants. "Five days! And he almost doubles in size."
Galahad looked away sheepishly.
"What have you been feeding him?" Merlin asks in horror.
"What do you mean he can open a refrigerator?" He rolls his eyes. He is just a dog.
Merlin made an exaggerated motion of opening a door. "Like this?"
Galahad rose a brow, "Of course not."
*Add reason of how he opens the refrigerator*
Geoffrey watched the two talk curiously.
He was annoyed that Merlin wasn't talking to him. He whined softly as he circled Merlin's leg.
"Play with me!" He barked.
Merlin bend down and patted Geoffrey's head.
"That's it. Diet time." He sighed wearily.
Geoffrey tilted his head to the side.
"What's diet? Is it a sweet?" He asked happily. He loved sweets.
Happynomnom chapter 5 . 3/17/2015
oh my god ahahahahahahahahaaaa yes that chapter was beautiful
litanolastar chapter 4 . 3/2/2015
nice chapter
kwm5000 chapter 3 . 2/28/2015
I love "best of all best friends"! This are such fun stories. You're great at writing "dog." How about Merlin and Geoffrey are supervising a training exercise on tracking and they discover something unexpected?
litanolastar chapter 3 . 2/28/2015
nice chapter;
litanolastar chapter 2 . 2/25/2015
I like it.
silksenseoverload chapter 2 . 2/24/2015
This is so adorable!
Camie04 chapter 1 . 2/24/2015
That was ridiculously adorable :)
Happynomnom chapter 1 . 2/23/2015
"And Merlin always smiled to himself whenever something exploded."
OH MY GOD I CANT STOP LAUGHING AHAHA I LOVE THAT BIT
this story is so cute :)
silksenseoverload chapter 1 . 2/23/2015
aawwhh 3 3 cute!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/23/2015
D'aaaaawwwww. Moar. I demand it.