Reviews for Secret of the Kitsune |
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![]() ![]() Love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE CONTINUE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So good! I cant wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Continue, please :3 |
![]() ![]() Please continue your history |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad this is still being updated. Personally I hope Tails gets to catch Eggman off guard with his Kitsune powers at some point because that would be entertaining. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good. I see you kept your promise about making this chapter [chapter 2] longer then chapter 1. It even has good formatting. Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job! There are a few thing I can tell you like length, etc to help improve. I can tell you via PM. |
![]() ![]() ![]() More make more pwese |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter (chapter 1) might make a bit more sense if there was a reason, or even a hint of one, why Miles created that tornado. Unless that's coming up later of course. Don't get me wrong though, this is an intriguing start. I look forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Teh shert. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Far too short. You got the premise pretty well, but this could've been much longer if you added more fluff. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow this story seems to be building up to be interesting! I hope this turns out great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww poor tails |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cant wait for more :D |