Out of context “PP incident” can really catch one off guard.

That one akward moment when you remember you now have all advantages and disadvantages of being a girl

Dude you need to fix your story telling is too damn retarded to read everyone play ooc so many bad grammar and many plot holes doesn't make sense
at all

Alright, so I'll be a blunt with my review rather than just tell you what a good job you did. There were/are three main issues I have with this fic that honestly were pretty distracting as I read through this the past couple of days.

To start off with, why is it that you would have Your Character be in the position of Co-Leader under Aqualad but than have everyone defer to her as the default leader? Having a Co-Leader is good, or a second in command in general, but after having Your Character say that they did not want the leader position, you almost instantly have her leading everyone in the next chapter. And in these last two chapters she has "Sagely Wisdom" that allows for them all to work together without a hitch but as soon as she leaves the team falls apart? I feel like you underestimate The Team. Which does bring me onto my next point.

Quite simply, Your Character is OP. Danny has to get creative in his fights against Ghosts because of the basic abilities of Intangibility and Invisibility and has been shown to be strong enough to lift a bus in his Ghost form. In his Human form though, it was shown very early on that he doesn't have the same strength. He only has the strength of his Human body, even if he does have access to most of his basic Ghost abilities. Your Character on the other hand has been shown to have full access to her Ghostly abilities and strengths in her base Human form. Many Authors on this site tend to make one the hero that they are using OP, especially in Crossover fics, so that's nothing new there. But it didn't even seemed like you tried to scale it to make it a more level playing field for an interesting fight to read. It was just kinda "Hey This Character is this strong" and didn't leave much in the way of Physical Growth for Your Character. Instead it has to be the Mental Growth, which isn't much after the first couple of chapters.

Your initial concept of Danny turning into a girl, while nothing new, did spark my interest and was decided to have a read. The first couple of chapters did have some humor from the idea of Danny getting used to being a girl but it was thrown out the window after the chapter in which Your Character had her first period, admittedly, not something I find many other Gender Bend fics dealing with but at the same time was when it truly stopped being Danny. If he was ever there to begin with. It seems that you only really recently started to have his personality shine in this last chapter and the fight against the Reds when you started to have Your Character start making puns. Something that has been sorely lacking for Your Character in this fic. And one of the reasons as for why I've been saying "Your Character" instead of "Danny." This character is much more of an OC than it is of Danny being OoC due to some basic things like not saying puns or how she had "Sagely Wisdom" despite just being a super-powered fifteen year old kid just trying to find their lot in life and some more radical things like many of the view points seeming to come from you instead of how Danny would view them.

And while I do wish to see how this fic will end, I found myself being forced to read through it for mostly the above mentioned. There are those who find this fic appealing to them and do give you their support, I find that this fic isn't for me. And while I do wish you the best of luck in finishing this fic, I also hope that more people are willing to give you reviews better than just "This is a good chapter. Keep it up!" and will try and give you honest feedback as well.

Anyway, Best of luck in your endeavors.

I REALLY like this story! OXD

... How come they didn't tell Artemis that Danny is co-leader?

Um, why doesn't Danny tell them that he's from a different dimension and that he/she WAS a boy?

Idk why but the power dampeners confuse me. Danny is dead, well half dead, and her powers are infused into her dna, so... idk I feel like it wouldn’t work on her/him or if it did it barely does anything because she is half dead. The cuffs should have echo energy infused into them to at least dampen her ghost powers...idk. The fic is amazing though. I’m re-re-reading it again and it’s still amazing, I’m just analyzing it more after the third time reading it.

Welcome back! It’s great to see you writing again. o()o

Diana saying little sister is getting annoying... I think shes said the word sister in this fic more times than in the whole dc universes combined to a main character.

It’s been so long I forgot where the story was I reread all of in a day

Love this! Thank you so much for updating. You are an amazing writer!

When speaking of Batman's city, you kept writing "gothEm instead of "gothAm", think of putting a A instead of that horrid E. ;)

That said it's another nice chapter, can't wait to both read the next one and read its remake.

A nice update, keep up the good work.

What.