I love, love, love the way you wrote the fight scene in chapter 1! It was just brilliant - clear, easy to follow, without sacrificing engaging-ness for clarity. I also love how you thought through Caroline's strategy character-wise and physical ability wise.

There is already a big problem with this scenario. There is no way a baby vamp can tackle Klaus. Not ever.

Amazing story, you did such a good job with building trust and affection with Caroline and Klaus' relationship, but also maintaining an interesting plot that isn't EXACTLY like the canon (which a lot of fanfics do sometimes). On to the sequel!

Good story

Loved this and going to head straight into the next instalment! Thank you for taking the time to write and share this fab story. X

Why isnt bonnie around after her stupidity?
Its something mikeal talk about Klaus using shield when that's exactly what he's doing now and seems to have had a lot of help hunting him.
Ester shouldn't be calling anyone a fool when she's just as bad if not worse than mikeal.
Mikeal answer also didnt really answer the question as he abused him before he made him a monster

Surprised Klaus saved Damon and wonder why Shelia didn't tell the others so they could stop bonnie.
If theyre right how much had Klaus pain tolerance went up and why was Damon effected hes been bitten by werewolves several times
They should have covered him in a coffinel then fill it with cement before they bury him.
So is Klaus saying he was broken and didnt comeback stronger
He needs to work on his and his families mental defense

Dissapointed how quickly they dismissed Stephan being a doopleganger and that none of the ghost could tell them.
Caroline plan was grear smd would work against the originals but at the same time kind what is power ing the spell keeping him Brian dead and how is it different from him being stone

Considering Finn wanted to die I don't see his problem with matt.
So where are the witchs and vampires Bonnie helped kill?

Wow that ending was surprising and really wanna know where the witch s got white oak from.
Its really something the witch's can plot to kill the originals from beyond the grace yet do nothing to stop silas

I dont see why weapons would be of little use to him when they work in supernaturals. Also wonder why no supernaturals don't seem to use projectiles when theyre effective even against them.
Whyd he wait to now to put protections on the house?

Why is she trusting bonnie after knowing shes been working for or with silas?
Surprised she didnt mention that silas looks like stephan
If kat is posing as Elena doesnt that mean she's in silas range and he should be able to get info about the cure from her mind

Wonder if the originals have been smart enough to build up a tolerance to vervain.
She should have got rid of her moms him instead of keeping it

Wow all that work to be a hybrid and yet he hasnt seemed to try to learn about and control his wolf.
Surprised milk helps

Don't vampires have predator lv sense of smell or is it just their hearing and eyesight thats enhanced?
Why does he call vampires demons and come to think about why could he use humans instead if wolves for the triangle.
Don't get why wolves have a nature hate for vampires instead if it being the other way around as vampires were made in repsonse to wolves and why neither don't have a natural hatred for witchs who mess with both