makes no sense

I just love your stories they are so adorable and wonderful. I really enjoy how you write C.C and Lelouch.

This was a good little fairy tale xD,not overly original or complicated however that doesn't detrac from your writing,it could have been better,but simple works for this,if you had given more explanations and characters to us i think it would only overcomplicate itself and lose its simple charm,or write yourself into a corner,something far too usual for my liking

Well this was a pleasant little fic. Shame it has a lot left unanswered. Like what was the prophecy? Who where Lulu's parents? What was his past? Was it a dream or really a memory?

Well, like i said, a lot that wasn't tied up. Would love to see a continuation of this showing there search for the Fairies and discovering more about Lulu's past and family.

Interesting. Not your typical fairy tale story.

Really Lelouch and C.C., you're both so endearingly stupid and in love. Just wow.

I love Lelouch & CC. I went on a binge reading to get to the end. Yea! Happy ending! Great job. :)

This was a lovely and albeit reasonably clichee, interesting and new turn on the fairytale genre. While there were some spelling and grammatical errors as well as some odd wordings likely due to autocorrect, the story was pleasant to read and formatted nicely.
The take on the characters was slightly bent, yet true at its core.
All in all the story had a very pleasing narrative and took the readers on a nice adventure into fantasy which deviates from the usual fanfiction found.
I have scoured through some of your previous stories and am currently in the progress of enjoying more but already your works have ensured you a new follower.
I hope you will achieve greater peaks along your journey and wish you the greatest joy as an author.
I shall return to your tales of farmers and witches, CEO's and waitresses and brokenhearted lovers, hungry for more

Waaaa~ the ending is so cute :3 I like it :D

A happily ever after for our demonic, yet kind fool and our resident witch. I really like how you took the whole fairy tale concept and warped it to create this fantastic Lelouch x C.C. piece. Every single chapter had me at the edge of my seat, hoping and wondering where the relationship will continue off of. Fantastic work!

Nice epilogue. Works both as an "The Adventure Continues..." kind of thing or as a tease for a sequel should you choose to do one at some point.

The whole thing with the wings is actually quite fascinating and thank you for the expanded explanation regarding it. I confess I wouldn't be opposed to having some of that info integrated into the story since I think it always make the whole world deeper and all that. It is a bit sad that Lelouch seemingly has no knowledge of it, though given the circumstances I suppose one can't blame him at all. The question of why he never bothered looking before is a fairly interesting one and he does literally just shrug it off when asked.

The brownie joke really was quite amusing. Little in-universe kind of things like that are always nice to see. C.C.'s slight hesitation due to not wanting to deal with the teasing was funny as well.

Overall a really fun story and setting with these characters. Thank you for completing it :)

Interesting concept

Like the story so far

Is there more?whats the prophecy.?What about Clovis? Does C.C. remember? The fairys went into seclusion when Lelouch was lost?is it a coincidence?

Aww!still got to question why Clovis didn't. Tell him but there is always the 11 chapter.i also really want to know the prophecy. They where adorable as kids.