Hey!

First thing: I loved this fic! I really loved it! it's great and brilliant, and perfect, and you write really well! ;)

Second: you will not post any more chapters? I NEED you to write more, I loved it!

Third: I don't know if you will get it, as it looks like you don't have posted anything for a long time... but if it does... congrats, it's a great fic!

Fourth: Please please please please! Post more chapters! or, at least, tell me what happens next (I'm really curious, you probably have noticed by now ' but I would rather wait for more chapters if they're coming )

I think that's all...

Well, see ya, I guess... (hopefully! )

so um.. hi. im just encountering this story and i realy reaaly like it. like whole bunches of likeingness. hmm im not sure thats a word. it is now. . anyway i found this on a perusal of sirius/remus art on DA. i found the link to this story. and its now 2007and ur last update was 2003. i was wondering if ur ever going to continue it? because i really love this story. plus ill be really sad if u dont. because ive read a lot of stories like this. where they start off awesome, and ur reading avidly, trying to find out wat happens next as fast as possible only to see that the story is unfinished and its been let for years with out an update. so please if you ever read this, i will be so thank full to you, you will be buried in virtual cookies forever. i need an update so bad. please im begging you to make an update. im like a junkie thats how amazing ur writing is. *puppy dog eyes* sirius/remus is like the best hp pairing ever. please and thank you hoping you recieve this, hoping immenselythat u get this reveiw.

yours truly, Calypso, sea goddess

Not to be annoying, but... when're you gonna update? I'm DYING to know what happens next! And I see that it's been a good few years since you added Chapter 5, and I'm just hoping that you will continue the story. I mean, I know you said that things like Snape reappearing will happen in Chapter 6, but I just wanna make sure. So... PLEASE update as soon as you physically can 'cause I REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY love this fic! It's so good that I was referred to it by a friend who had told me about it before, saying how good it was! If that's any incentive to update... haha, sorry, I know it's annoying to get these kinds of reviews, but I'm not a patient person! _

Cheers!

I really liked this story! So keep up with the good work and update soon!

All right, you have Purple Mouse to thank for me even knowing your name. But I am now going to flatter you with a full review on one condition: You update!

I must say this is one of the best HP stories I have read thus far. Some of the others including a crossover and Cassandra's Draco Trilogy and random humour fics that I found amusing. But this is the first particularly about Remus.

Remus is my second favorite Marauder. I felt bad when the director made him look like a mad cynical scientist in the third movie. But the third book was my favorite for the sole reason of Remus and Sirius.

This is a very logical way for how he might've grew up, and I applaud you for attemtping it in the first place and wish you luck in finishing. I will offer as much help as I can if you need any. You write their personalities almost perfectly in my opinion, and I'm sure you won't be like some authors and make it sappy, like most shounen-ai stories I've read. A little sap is good for the brain, but other authors make their stories drip, I swear.

You pulled off the descriptions with perfect ease, as if you were Rowling herself. You deserve to be an author of your own stories.

I hope I'm not flattering you too much, because this doesn't even begin to explain. I wanted to cry when I finished what you had so far and realised that you hadn't updated in over a year. It's sad that such potential just quit like that. You and Purple Mouse are some of the greatest authors on this site to me. I can't wait for you to continue your work, because this is great.

I'm running out of things to say, but I'm sure you get the message. Please, please update soon. You left it at such a near cliffy! Thank you for listening. _

-Danni

*checks off fic* Yay for re-reading stuff... Although boo for the fact that a fic that was added to your favs MONTHS ago STILL hasn't been updated since then... *glares* Anyway, awsome fic, but I'd really like to see more.

Is Chapter 5 the end? Is something else really wrong with Remus? Should i wait and find out?

My, it has been a while since you last updated this story. I see. I just discovered it today and really hope you will continue it. It's VERY good, and it'd be a crime if you didn't. I've added it to my favourites and hope to see you update it.

If you can write such a wonderful fic with an accual plot, you can't leave us hanging! This is so good! Please consider updating if you have time to write! You've got so many reviewers!

You updated that other fic! I guess IT'S fans are more important to you than I am. WELL FINE. It's over.(don't ever call me again!)
I am going to say one last thing to you.
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thank you

Oh, cant believe you didnt finish this fic! Its so god. :sobs: Why?

It isn't so much a matter of never updating again as CURRENTLY having no time in which to do so. But thank you, ever so much, for enjoying this fanfiction enough to fill my review page with cunningly-separated swear words. It makes a fanfic author feel warm and fuzzy all over.
Best wishes,
Ryuen

Well, I guess it IS your fic. But just tell us you're not going to update it anymore

YOU'RE NEVER GOING TO UPDATE! LIAR!
Why don't you just post in the summary(inactive) or (done).
BASS TERD.
(been checking this fic for a month)

Beautiful fic, really. I love the dynamic between the Marauders. Snape's aympathy toward Remus makes me feel such joy, you can't imagine it. Lovely descriptions, great grammar, intruiging plotline so far, and good characterization! Is this going to end up slashy? Sirius seems to like Remus. (I am a big Sirius/Remus and/or Snape/Remus fan, can you tell? I'm grasping at straws here.)
To address the Malfoy/Marauders age thing, according to The Order of the Phoenix, Malfoy would have been a sixth year when the Marauders were first years. Old, ne? o.0 It surprised me when I read it.
Love you! ALL your stuff! Remus and all your Fushigi Yuugi pieces as well.
Uruviel