Absolutely amazing story. I absolutely loved it. Too bad your done with Chuck fanfiction but I do hope you return. Your writings on Chuck(my favorite tv show) are unbelievable and fantastic. I'm truly a fan. Thank you so very much for sharing this with us

Great story of what could have been. Thanks for allowing WillieGarvin to take up the premise and run with it.

I really enjoyed this story. I am glad WillieGavin picked it up. Very creative. I hope you come back to Chucks again someday.

i just read your story. wishing you would continue this au story line. but thank you for writing it

Hi! I'm here from WillieGarvin. This was a nice AU that definitely puts Chuck and Sarah on another course. Thanks for writing.

I loved this story. Thank you. Great idea, great set up and great writing. Well done. I understand that you will not be continuing it, but I sure hope someone does. It's a great set up for future stories. You can still have the exploration of the romance as the relationship develops, but without all the painful angst. As a huge Charah fan, I love the idea. I'm thinking along the lines of Nick and Nora Charles.

This is actually one of the good ones.
I would've read this had it been a multi-chapter story of how it would have progressed from there.
Thanks for posting
Cheers!

when are you gonna post another story. they are great!

This was really great. Shame there is no sequel, I would of loved to have seen where they went from here in a multi chapter story.

really loved this one-shot, is there any chance of some more of this story? it was a v good read. DR

Another very enjoyable, lncredible story. Sorry to read no more Chuck stories but I can understand. I am one of readers who will constantly re-read what you have posted. Thanks for making my days more happy.

Wish you weren't done writing Chuck stories because this was excellent. You did exactly what an M-rated story should do: hold the interest of the reader with plot and have the sexual situations be the bonus rather than writing sex for the sake of sex.

Excellent work. Sorry I didn't review this sooner. I'm trying to make up for not reading as many other authors, particularly ones that have left me reviews before.

I like this much better than the show's plot, it makes for a way better cover relationship!

Absolutely loved this! So well written and engaging. I love imagining what the future would have looked like for them following this night.

Nice take on the pilot episode.

2 things that I had small issues with. 1) Sarah's constant put downs of Chuck (while not too obvious...were there) and 2) Sarah's constant mentioning of her previous sexual experiences before that night.

With that said I did enjoy this story and hope to one day see an update on some of your stories.