| Reviews for Across the Line |
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DancingInTheDark85 chapter 1 . 11/10/2017 This is one of my favourite Careese stories. I love how Reese acts and how frustrated Carter is with him, and you build up the sexual tension perfectly. And it also manages to be very sexy without being smutty. |
Rania760 chapter 1 . 10/22/2017 This was really a truth serum that makes him go towards her and open him to her. Good Josh, not angry but in love with him too. Kisses |
Treehouse31 chapter 1 . 6/21/2015 Slightly different take on the 'truth serum' angle. Enjoyed the ride - I can totally see Joss needed a bit of time to process the change in her relationship with John, especially girding herself for the possibility he might not remember. Nice. |
jinx6 chapter 1 . 5/30/2015 Damn, I miss Person of Interest and wonderful Carter & Reese stories like this one. I really enjoyed reading this story. Thanks. |
FalconRukichi chapter 1 . 4/16/2015 Damn sweeeeeeeet! After watxh se 4- epi 20.. Make me miss them so much! And here your sweeeet moment o them! |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/9/2015 Really gentle and nice. Thanks |
fangirlu chapter 1 . 3/2/2015 Loved the twist on this with the truth serum instead of alcohol. Its so them. And that kiss was perfection. This was a joy to read. |
RadioShack84 chapter 1 . 2/27/2015 I'm only an occasional Reese/Carter fan, I will admit, but this one got me. I could have seen the two of them getting together in this fashion, and you did a great job of keeping both of them in-character, going just far enough but not too far with John's reactions while he's drugged, and you captured Carter's frustration with the situation well. Great story! I really enjoyed it. :) |
Chellero chapter 1 . 2/24/2015 Yeah, you already know I enjoyed this! "He looked worse for wear and Shaw just looked pissed off. So, a typical night...or morning...with these two."-LOLOLOL I swear, I love how you wrote loopy Reese. His loud whispers and little waves cracked my ish up. "He'd laid his head back, eyes closed, and his arms spread out over the back of the couch. pulling his tattered shirt tight across his chest. He'd propped his feet on her coffee table, his legs wide. Her throat suddenly dried up at the sight."-She ain't the only one, mkay? "And you look beautiful."-You know how you have those moments reading fic where you gotta pause and be like Aw sookie sookie now? I had that moment right here. LOL I just loved the part where he tipped her chin up and started telling her what she meant to him, and how she left because she didn't want to hear it while he was drugged and wouldn't remember. I really liked how Joss kept it real during their talk, about how they didn't do things like talk about their feelings for one another. How that wasn't how they rolled and they were being pushed along because drugs. "Please, Joss, it needs to be you." All up against her lips, after all the nuzzling? Good gawd! Oowee! Have my panties, Reese! Have them! LOL "Not a word, Joss." Ha! "He'd reached up and clasped her hands in his, pressing them over his heart. That was how she joined him in sleep - curled around him, comfortable, warm, and content."-I cannot take this. That was just too much sweetness for me. Gah! That ending slayed me. I'm slain. I am. That hand grasp, pulling her to him, kissing her temple, letting her know he remembered. Her burying her face in his chest in relief. I mean, I'm slain. Loved it, lady. Where's the next one? :D |
Lady Sundiver chapter 1 . 2/24/2015 Fantastic! What a great character study between these two very complex, determined people. Wow! What a kiss. As the saying goes, less is more. Thanks for writing this piece. |
J2CaReese chapter 1 . 2/23/2015 I loved loved your fics. I read it 3 times. You are perfectly transcribed doubts Joss and John. Neither thought the other could love. The idea of the truth serum is excellent. The reactions of your characters are in line with real Joss somewhat gruff and John with its incredible smirk. And the end is amazing Joss happens worried and John who said he remembers everything. Relief for both. It's just perfect. Too bad it n there is no sexytime ! |
TheNextPage chapter 1 . 2/23/2015 perfection everything about that was so good, and such a wonderful moment, analysed delicately and deeply. love love loved it! and that last line from john *swoon* i yelped a little in triumph, that was great! |
Bklyngrl chapter 1 . 2/22/2015 Oh this was so very nice. Loved the way you show not only the love between them, but also the respect. Joss couldn't bring herself to question John in his condition and John really felt bad about leaving the way he had once he saw the look of apprehension on Joss' face. That ending was beautiful. Thank you. |
literaturechick chapter 1 . 2/22/2015 This is fabulously written. You really nailed the true them. I love the uninhibited John. He's delicious. Joss was so cool, staying true to their relationship and herself, not asking any questions she wouldn't ask pre-truth serum. The ending was so feely, deep, and emotional. I love that Joss didn't hold back her joyful cry. Sweet. Exceptional! Thanks. |
oaktreeX chapter 1 . 2/22/2015 What a gem. Feeling tingly here... |