Great chapter, well written, looking forward to more

You know the old digimon game rumble arena which connected the first 3 seasons together? when the war against evil is over wonder if they'll have something like a battle tournament too since battling can be like a sport too. (Power ups can be like OC digi battle cards too, from all the games or even the digital card battle game also)

Also maybe have Reapermon from that game appear like an enemy too.

Nice work

another dark and excellent chapter, but boy Janyu missed a serious opportunity with not punching TK, but I have a strange feeling that something good may appear out of Juggernaut, could be wrong but still, anyway keep up the good work

You were not kidding about writing action scenes. Whew, that was, different. There's a lot to unpack and the 'animation' approach worked against you in this chapter.

Other than that, a few narrative choices raised an eyebrow more than once. Nice to see that everyone is suffering except the Tamers, the gods that they are, with the exception of Takato going through his fifth or sixth mental episode a short nap and a juice box can't fix. Janyu apparently can bust out Judo to incapacitate guards. Metal Garurumon wasted his element of surprise on shooting the tar and not the pig, which made me scratch my head...

Great chapter!

please continue

Ouch the digidestined are getting rinsed and the tamers are fairing marginally better, where's Matt and Metalgarurumon? I love the higher stakes and outright battle compared to the show, it really brings the feeling of what the previous war would have been like for the digidestined. Great work as always!

Bloody hell. Things get kind of okay in the Digital World thanks to some quick thinking, but Earth just keeps getting worse. That is incredibly demoralizing, to say the least. Their fighting numbers keep decreasing, while the enemy is only surging in power. While I definitely don't remember enough of the canon to remember how that turned out, I can still hope that this doesn't end too much worse than that.

The defenders either need a Protagonist Speech or a very big weapon. Juggernaut fits one of those descriptions, but it does have a history of being horrendously unstable.

Nice chapter! Good work!

Soo if found your story yesterday and like I am have read the whole thing in 1 1/2 days.

My thoughts:

It is definitely one of the better stories here on and I have read many fics in my 8 years I am on this site. Your story follows the original story very faithfully and you even have some interesting diverging plot points which could become really interesting drama in the second part of this story.

Takeru: I think at this point it becomes clear that he is not really fit to lead HYPNOS. He probably means well but each of his actions only made the whole crisis worse. from confiscating the D3 of Ken and Davis to his cold behavior to the other DigiDestined. Juggernaut is the same there was only one instance where it worked like it was supposed to, but every Digimon over Adult it was used on was meaningless. He is a liability with his obsession to eradicate the Dark Ocean at this point.

Tai: ohh boy that will get weird when the Tamer will finally meet him when they go to the Digi world in a few chapters. Especially Rika with sora's clone that will produce a firework.

Tamers and Digievolution: I think i see where you a going with that. It seems that every progression takes longer to dispel the Digievolution and come back to the rookie-level. I wonder how hard it will be when they finally reach Mega level and Bio merge seeing that at that point te Digimon has an internal power source to continually hold its new form.

The old generation: not much to say Ken and Davis are helpful but they come off as a little too much hands-off in their interaction. Sora is the only one who tried to train Rika but the rest?

So this are my most prominent thoughts so far, about your plot overall I like it.

Ps: I just hope you change the ending up because that is the plot point I always hated about tamers.

Hey, I'm starting to see TK's point of view, despite how much worse he's making the situation, this is really well written, an excellent chapter, though i noticed you put wargreymon in the fight at the start, i think you meant wargrowlmon. really looking forward to seeing how this plays out, any ideas how you'll incorporate last evolution

looking forward for more

Regards

Great chapter. This is turning into a massacre! Your spin on how the situation should have played out is very interesting, I'm enjoying it!

With regards on the overall story process, it occurs to me that at the rate this story is going you're going to have 300-400 chapters, maybe 450. After episode 23 you're going to write Interlude 20 and then write the corresponding chapters for episode 24, if I understand your formula correctly. If I could make a suggestion: after episode 24, stop the story (as in declare the story "Complete") and start a new series where the Tamers are travel the Digital World.

Digimon Trinity: Part 2's chapter 1 can start with episode 25. This series will cover episode 25-40. Then you stop there and start Digimon Trinity: Part 3 where it focuses of the battle with the D-Reaper and the aftermath. You can add "Runaway Locomon" at the end just like you did with "Battle of Adventurers".

I like how you are breaking down the episodes to give the story more a believable and realistic feel and it gives the characters more depth. However, readers will be overwhelmed by the numerous chapters and they would be numb to the real impact you want to provide. By breaking the overall story into parts, you maintain the pace and drive home an impact you want readers to have, even to those who have watched the show.

If this is this good then beelzemon and the d reaper will be outstanding and btw please tell me things will get better after this chapter

Hm. Mechanically, this chapter was all over the place. At first it's not bad, but then as the story continues it, well, becomes a big knot of 'as', 'and', 'was', and adverbs that would slay any editor brave enough.

The strange pivots in character perspective did not help either, or the ellipses... Like... They're... Everywhere... To... Denote... Trailing...

More Matt and erika moments please you when have a chance