| Reviews for Brothers and Enemies |
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Quiet Ryter chapter 2 . 3/29/2015 Thanks for updating your story. This is a fantastic and cool chapter with an awesome ending.:) |
BelieveInTheHoundsOfJustice60 chapter 2 . 3/27/2015 Awesome update. Great story. Sad it's over. |
Guest chapter 2 . 3/27/2015 can I be in the next story my name is Becca |
Pinayprincesa chapter 2 . 3/27/2015 Dean and Roman are sweet to stay with Seth throughout the night after taking care of him. |
Esha Napoleon chapter 2 . 3/27/2015 Awwwwwww 3 |
Princess Aquilia chapter 2 . 3/27/2015 That was just too sweet, and totally in character, which is hard to pull off, so great job! Nice cliffhanger for the story, makes me want to "watch" how they act around each now on camera :) |
jessicaramsey78 chapter 2 . 3/27/2015 Awww |
lremmy chapter 2 . 3/27/2015 That was beautifully written. I love these stories of Dean and Roman helping Seth. You are a fantastic writer. I hope there will be more chapters. Just amazing. |
Guest chapter 2 . 3/26/2015 I love it |
Syreina chapter 2 . 3/26/2015 YAY thank you for this chapter. It's so good to see them back on the same page after all of that. |
NESSAANCALIME6913 chapter 2 . 3/26/2015 I can not wait for them to be brothers on screen again, I honestly think it's what's missing from their careers; having someone as a constant, girlfriends/fiancee's/wives, don't count, it may sound harsh but these guys need each other. |
jessicaramsey78 chapter 1 . 3/23/2015 Hmmmm no ideas maybe he goes into a deep dark place and they have to talk him back out of it good story can't wait to read more |
Quiet Ryter chapter 1 . 3/2/2015 This is an awesome chapter with a really cute and fantastic ending.:) |
Princess Aquilia chapter 1 . 2/20/2015 Throw Big Show...lol This was really a touching story, with good descriptions (especially the way Dean and Ro found Seth). |
Ciara in cotton socks chapter 1 . 2/20/2015 Yet another brilliant instalment in the series, unsurprisingly I adored this just as much as the other two, maybe even a little more. Seeing Seth go through his increasingly bad migraines is heartbreaking and enthralling all at once. The poor thing, his pain was palpable here, as was the need he has for Dean and Roman to take care of him rather than any of his new colleagues. I like the fact that the Authority members play only minor roles again, thus emphasising the bond between the core trio. The fact that Dean and Roman still come running to Seth's aid even after all he has done to them is very telling, as are the little glimpses into Seth's addled train of thought. You make it clear that he misses and needs them terribly, even if this only manifests itself during the migraines. I would love to see his reaction to waking up with them still beside him, maybe even sowing the seeds for his eventual redemption? Favourite parts are as follows: 'Seth jolted at the touch, then he realized that he smelled plain soap and Suave vanilla shampoo. Dean. Dean would help him. Dean would make the pain stop, he always did, no matter how mean Seth was to him.' Gah, Seth recognising him by his scent is adorable, as is his acknowledgement that even though he's done Dean wrong his brother still chooses to protect him! 'Seth sighed happily as he felt his brothers around him, protecting him, like always.' This may, potentially, have overwhelmed me ever so slightly. I need a reunion where Seth is not in debilitating pain! As to your suggestion of a Dean-based story- I love it! If you want to continue with the more physical hurt as a theme then I would be interested in seeing him suffer either panic attacks or seizures as other reviewers have suggested. On the other hand, I'd love to see your take on Dean with a mental illness such as bipolar disorder. Seeing how both he and his brothers deal with the contrast between his bouts of mania and then depression, among other elements of the disorder, would be intriguing. Just an idea. Great story once again, I hope there is more to look forward to in this series! |