Oh! This is soooooo going on my fav list! :D

You finished this fanfic with a bang. Great job. Really sad to see it end, but I loved it a lot. Amazing job ... Awesome writing!
Are you going to start writing another SWR fanfic? You should. You're mighty good at it. ;)

very well done darlin! please write more!

I've had such a wonderful time reading these. The word flow and character discection is sublime!
I really hoe to see more author in the Rebels universe. Gold star for achievement!

The Inquisitor is NOT a Sith

Wow! Awesome chapter! Can't wait for more!

I didn't think think this was too dark or graphic. I did like your examination of the hallucinations they forced on Kanan and how he could see through them because of course the Empire doesn't know the distinct personalities that make up the crew. Then when Ezra was actually able to reach out to Kanan to reassure him that they weren't abandoning him and that Kanan could sort through this to realize very quickly it really was Ezra was great.
I'm not sure if you would be interested in this, but maybe an after the rescue piece or maybe when Ezra reaches out to Kanan right before the rescue and Kanan's eyes pop wide-open when he realizes Ezra nearby making contact.

this is very good.. I would like to see i th ink.. maybe the ineraction of the fight scene? What kanan and ezra's bond went through when Ezra fell off the cat walk?
good story tho! great work!

To Stormcutter684: The odd things Kanan says to Ezra are because he realized something wasn't right. If Ezra doesn't correct him, is it really Ezra he is talking to?

Oooh! Nice last ending sentence to finish off the chapter with a bang.
The only thing I don't get is Kanan said "Ezra Hasenpfeffer" umm .. I Don't get that. And then what's with the Ezra's mother in Corusant and his Father dying?
Other than that confusion, I think it's an awesome chapter. Very dark, but well written. :)

the ghost crew should be over run and then ezra uses all of his power to create a force made force field and then he fights darth vader in a different one

:O

Update you monster!
I love Kanan and Ezra bonding. It's my aesthetic.

UPDATE NOAW!

I think it would be really cool if you could write the next chapter from Kanan's point of view of the first chapter. Like his reaction when Ezra makes contact with him through the force. But anyway! Love this story and you my friend are an excellent writer!

Thanks for the mild insult, junior!

This was really good. No one seems interested in writing about what life was like on the streets, especially when Ezra was younger before he became so adept at taking care of himself. This part of the chapter involving Kanan and the last chapter were really interesting. This was a fresh angle to focus on the force and what its like for someone who is force-sensitive to interact with it.