Nicely done especially on keeping the identity of who the murderer was for so long

Just read this again! Still a great story!

I just read this entire thing in a day. Great job! A fun read!

Nvm haha

Oh my god is the serial killer Ginny?!

I really liked the story, though I could have done without the cathouse scene at Malfoy Manor. I just skimmed through past it untill the plot picked back up. I was also a little surprised they didn't narrow their suspect list to witches primarily and how silly of Harry to fixate on Molly. She should have been excluded for some of the same reasons other Wesley's were. Overall good story. I have to admit early on I was thinking either Patil or Cho Chang was the villian. The best friend clue made me believe it was Cho, though there were a few things that made me second guess myself.

A sweet ending! And the thriller/ murder mystery aspect was intriguing. However, I constantly struggled with the flow of the story, and found the story telling to be somewhat disjointed. But I'd still like to try some of your other stories.

Xander, you little scamp! What are you up to?

These time jumps consistently confuse me.

Ooh, it's coming to a head soon!

Daphne continues to be a horrible human. And Pansy has anger and communication issues. Haha.

I think Lucius is one of my preferred characters. Not sure how that came about.

Oh, I thought as much!

I've never read Granger's parents being portrayed in such a way. It made me hate them, but also not, and I just don't know how I feel about that. Though little Xander sounds like the cutest.

I thought he'd have more of a reaction. But lolGranger's last line.