Heeeey! This is awfully wonderful. But really, I hate broken hearted stories. Urgh they're my favorite pairing, why can't u make something light and happy for them :(. You broke my heaaaaaartt

This is so Sadi cried and it's not weird I cry while reading my own story to but it's not in this website!

This is a good idea! I like how you separated the little clips of Aoko and Kaito growing before...before THAT happened. Wait, please, my heart is recovering...

Anyway! Keep writing! So much potential here! :D