Plz update I love it

Amazing story! I like your writing style, great details. I like how Peter has a little sister, name Peyton and that they lived in a little house on Stonehaven property. I wonder if Peyton’s friends are going to come to Stonehaven. I hope Tina leave, soon. No not a cliff hanger! I do like how you wrote Lilly into the story, but what happens next. I cannot wait. Your story is really good. Please add more chapters.

I tried to get the pen OFF the page...
Nick jumped up OFF the bed.

The word is OFF, with two "f"s

brown hair fiancé?

1. it's brown-hairED
2. they're called brunets. her brunet fiancé.

orange hair brother?

1. it's orange-hairED
2. they're called gingers. The correct term is ginger-haired

the blankets that WERE covering my chest fell onto my lap

I pushes the rest of the blankets OFF myself and slowly crawled OFF the bed.

I held onto the bedpost (one word)

I stepped OFF the last step and walked down the hallway

I'm really liking this so far! Can't wait to read more!

Update soon

Crear chapter

Good start