Without a doubt, this story is one of the best Mimato fics out there. I couldn't help feeling like this could be so real, seeing as how you nailed their characters and interactions so well. The plot flows nicely and the ending totally made me go, "Ah, finally these two.." hihi

Great job!

brilliant story

You ended this story perfectly. You really couldn't have done a better job with this. Definitely one of my favorites. Thanks for writing! This kind of reminded me vaguely of Arte-chan's Boys Before Flowers which I've read through again recently. But wow, I like this so much better.

Another favorite chapter here. I like the respect between them as brothers and your writing is great here. And the ending, I loved it.

Aahh, this one tore at me! I love the brother dynamic and relationship they have so to see Mimi come in between them...Ouch. I love the drama of this story.

Ooh, this one got to me. I felt bad for them both! Yet it's been my favorite chapter so far.

I've always thought Takeru was a good match for Mimi but never actually read a story with them as a couple. This chapter was good, their reactions were written well. This promises to be very interesting I'm sure...

Good story.

Good for Takeru, he is a good brother.

Good chapter.

The love is complicated, very complicated.

Good for Yamato, Taichi is a good friend.

A very complicated situation.

Complicated, Mimi, Yamato and Takeru. Good chapter.

Yamato and his problems... Good chapter.