I really like this please do more

I really like this

Aaw poor sweetheart 3

nice heartwarming this the final closure or may we see a chapter 3?

Right. In. The Feels.

Oh gosh, oww, my heart. Poor baby Elsa... Nicely written though Aimee, nice work.

Very nice piece. I like that you show how Elsa's self-sacrificial side shows how good a person and how loving she is, but also exists as a flaw in a way - maybe she would have discovered that love controls her powers earlier on had she been more selfish and sought healing for herself. I don't place blame on her, as I think her parent's decisions affected how she dealt with this, but anyway...good writing.