This is my favourite thing ever now. Wonderfully written, believable dialogue, good pacing... and of course the subject matter. 10/10 so far.

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Why didn't Ben go Razor Jaws instead?

You have a lot of inconvenience, like was gwen only in his school that one day? Surely after the way they left it she would have kept going over, did they not talk what happened? What about his mum and dad?
Seems a little off to me there.
Also I Love Ben/Gwen

Not gonna lie u hav3 lost me here now. Thought this would be a nice story
but its getting weird and cunfusing.

I belive you! I mean, since there's ten chapters after this one warning of a hiatus that more than likely happened years ago, I believe you when you say you'll get back to the story.

Sorry for the joke review thing. I just like to point out when an author leaves in a Hiatus warning or something in the middle of a fic. It's equal parts Jarring, and Hilarious.

Thanks for the fic!

I usually prefer being constructive when reviewing because I’ve been bashed from a review but I mean I haven’t even finished chapter 23 and I don’t know that I ever will. I really liked the story starting out, it was a little emotional but still and then it continued on and I have never had an opinion about the Kai girl but if our one and only goal was to make me hate her and refuse to read a story with her in it ever again then you have accomplished that. Then we have your little authors notes where you literally tell what’s gonna happen in the chapter sometimes, while I hate when it happens have you ever heard of a cliffhanger or are you always prepared for the chapter you write to be the last? In the past year of my life I have questioned my religion to the point I don’t really consider myself a Christian but my fuck the amount of times you break the commandment, and you know which one I mean, makes me feel like I’m still one because I almost stopped as soon as that shit started. Then we come to your time skips and all the ... hold on let me skip ahead a month so I know what to write on this review. Alright I’m here to finish my review a month later. My gosh I know tomorrow I’m gonna hate that I did this but oh have set me off with this story so fucking hard.

A little moody, but understandable after a heartbreak. Let's see where this goes.

Beautiful!

Figures his parents are illogical.

Lol I like the way you had the Green Goblin lines from SpiderMan.

AMAZING

Great work. I'd say leave it as it is. Don't go with the idea that it was a dream, it cheats your reader.

I'll be looking forward to the sequel.

Sniff Sniff this was great ending and story congrats Sniff Sniff

I'll be waiting for sequel

Bwen Forever

This story is getting good. Keep up the good work man!

SOOB SOOB This is a very very beautiful story congratulation SOOB
I can't wait for final chapter
Bwen Forever