Please update again!

The sound effects are useless and distracting. please cut them out

This was great! Are you still working on this? Thanks for the great read

Continue its stating to get great

Are you 3 man? Linking arms sounds like something that'd pop up in a kindergarten romcom, and all these extra 'sound effects' just makes the scene and ur characters feel immature as hell. Fucking cut them out if you want us to take you seriously.

where is the next chAPTER

Great story I like it please update

Honestly i found it kind of funny how virtually every chapter there is at least one line that displays a characters own surprise at an event that they witnessed what i am talking about is the ("...!...) icon the only reason i find it funny is because it reminds me too much of the Alert Icon and the Alert sound effect from the metal gear solid franchise its the sound effect when snake gets spotted by an enemy soldier. Oh and i loved your fanfic so far keep up the good work!.

I might be saying this a little early but OP much?

someone is a naruto fan

More!

I just caught this. Sad to see it hasn't been updated in so long. I was enjoying the story as it was progressing. Though Kunou is my personal favorite as well, the idea of the other girls getting into the game sounds fun. I wish you'd be willing to pick it back up but, it's unlikely you'll even read this message.

Why not just reply to Serafall in like? NO reason to be speechless just because she is outgoing and bubbly. I never did understand that. I think the way she acts is quite adorable, really,

Issei should not need permission to use his own powers. That is why he was trained, to be able to use his powers...

...gentle fist really? Everything else kinda worked but that is just too far out there. Nice try. I'll keep reading for the fluff because that is actually pretty good but that is just a face palm moment.