| Reviews for A Mother's Will |
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   Anisabel chapter 9 . 4/18 I like your story. Please continue more. |
| hawkswench chapter 9 . 12/27/2019 I do hope one day you finish this. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 11/19/2019 Please update |
| Khatix chapter 4 . 11/9/2019 Wonder if that was Lilly disguised as Lockhart. |
| aradia1967 chapter 9 . 8/26/2019 if you're still writing fanfiction please update this story |
| monbade chapter 9 . 7/23/2019 more please |
| ChrisW96003 chapter 9 . 6/12/2019 Chapters: 9 - Words: 33,040 - Reviews: 205 - Favs: 669 - Follows: 919 - Updated: Jan 9, 2017 - Published: Feb 17, 2015 - id: 11056168 Today's date: 06-12-2019 Almost 2 years sense an update... Is it DEAD? |
| EdTheBeast chapter 9 . 4/29/2019 Again a great chapter! I did not notice more than one spelling/grammar error. |
| EdTheBeast chapter 8 . 4/29/2019 write/right, think there was another like this near the beginning; while this one was in the prior paragraph! Another great chapter! |
| EdTheBeast chapter 7 . 4/29/2019 Another great chapter. Showing a second way to get an animagus form! |
| EdTheBeast chapter 6 . 4/29/2019 "Why/While I don't approve" Still a fantastic story line that many should read! |
| EdTheBeast chapter 5 . 4/28/2019 OK. Getting a hint of whats coming. Excellent story plot. Only noticed two this time. The beginning of a must read story! |
| EdTheBeast chapter 4 . 4/28/2019 Very good take on Lockheart. The plot thickens! mad instead of made this time. A few other grammar ones, But fewer than the other chapters! |
| EdTheBeast chapter 3 . 4/28/2019 made/mad the/they/he/she or/of so/to etc. Still a fantastic story plot. Keeping us in the air, weather Albus is bad or not! |
| EdTheBeast chapter 2 . 4/28/2019 Again, very interesting plot line! A was a reader for Mrs Emory & Treble Heart Publishing. I was paid, as well as able to keep the story, if I wanted. I am writing my own fan fiction, so do not have the time to fix stories like I did. I did not count the errors, weather grammar or spelling, but there were around 10 this chapter. I am beginning to love your story line, so it's not a major problem about the errors! Keep up the story, as I said it is B/A-. Without the errors it would be an A story. |
