I smell BROOKEN.
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Ha! Albedo gets it XD

continue. and please dont make this yaoi. ı like brother like relationship between them

I must need more of this!

Aww look it poor Rook trying to make it up to him.. And the chocolates! I bet he got the idea from Kevin though. Ben only denied the being exes bit! He's hopeful I feel but just too worried about his current "what now?" Crisis :3 Al just needs hugs right now

Funny Ben reaction to Gwen:)

I think I know where this is going, but I want to be surprised. I really like this side of Albedo, and I understand Ben's doubts about him, I'm thinking "Boys, C'mon! Stop acting like strangers, be friends! Please!" Because there's still a wall between them that no one want to touch. Yes, please write quicker.

Rook blue and furry,that's funny;).

I hope Ben comes back home in case the whole family searches for is so kind to Albedo:)

Are you ever gonna update this ?

Nice chapter Albedo able to trust Ben enough to show his scar:)

wow intense this just keeps getting better :)

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Hahaha that one may or may not have hit really far in home. This chapter hit so far in home that it was a home run, straight out of the field into the atmosphere only to come crashing back down into Earth's orbit to collide into my face with all the force of an all powerful emotional cosmic entity intent on hurting my heart.

Thanks for the pain! I'd watch SpongeBob but I love my self on occasion, so now I'm going to sit here and stew in my thoughts. Maybe listen to some Evanescence.

What can I say. I really love this, and I can't wait (well actually I can) for the upcoming chapters. I like your writing, its okay whenever you're glad with it, and you think it's the best way to tell your story.

yay! an update I liked this story so much im happy to see it continued and I think the chapters going great

I binged read all of this before school. I think it's inspirational that you took so long in between updates and picked this project back up again.

There's a noticable improvement between chapter three and chapter four! I have a soft spot for Albedo redemption fics. Have a lovely day and best of luck to all writing endeavors current and future.