I love how you portrayed Pandora's feelings for Jason. As someone who's pining herself, I know that you don't really choose to crush on someone first by counting the age gap, so I absolutely LOVED the way Pandora didn't really count the years between herself and Jason until much, MUCH further on... Not to mention... when you love both Jason AND Damian...

I wish there were alternate endings, one with Jason and one with Damian. TT~TT

You've been reading Twilight again, haven't you? ;D

Holy shit, is he crazy? Those things cost more than a house! How did he even get one on a whim?

This chick reminds me of Lara-Jean Covey from To All the Boys movie, she's adorable XD

Aww, they're so cute! Like Lara-Jean and Peter (but not the second film, lol).

I loveeee your story have read it twice while i wait for updates (hint hint) and i think your damien writing is sooo good you just get him. Everyone else writes him like a bratty asshole, granted he can be, but there are more layers to his character. And I loveeee Pan she is great, creative and actually has character. I cant wait to see where the story goes.

I actually dont mind the slow burn story because you use it to give them and their relationship so much more debt that you barely feel it.

I would also love it if we saw more Pan with the bat family.

I would like to see what Bruce's reaction to everything going on is, i love the way Pan bounces off of other characters. And if you plan on writing more side stories it would be awesome to see Damien's reaction to Pan's dates, you kind of just mentioned it but that's a side of Damien I would kill to see.

Alright I'm done sorry for the long comment lol Hope you update soon

Honestly, I can't express in words how much I love this fic! No matter how many fics I read, I always come back to this one because the way you write is just so so so beautiful. My favorite batboys are Jason and Damian and you write their characters so wonderfully! If you ever decide to write more batboy fics in the future, I'll definitely be in line to read them!

The story is really touching~ I really love their relationship...it's so... I can't describe it. It warms my heart reading this story and this scene. I truly enjoy and adore this story. I look forward to the next update. Keep up the great work! Cheers~

omfg im gonna be honest and say when i picked this up i was hesitant of the tags bc im first and foremost a dick grayson stan and second a jason todd apologist. and then when jason actually became part of the story i was like, Oh my god jason she's like 15 lmao but the way u handled the nuances of their interactions and relationship just really struck me. god im so much more invested in jasons character arc than i thought id be, coming into a damian fic like this. im sorry damian LOL

anyways i just wanted to say that im super grateful i trusted in your amazing writing and ocs and worldbuilding and MOST OF ALL character relationships. and im glad i read this fic qwq tysm for all ur hard work!

Hey, I just finished reading this and I want to say that the way you wrote characters is absolutely fantastic. It's clear that they each think in different ways, which is impressive seeing as many published works fail that. I also love the Asus you sometimes do. I know you already have a list of one to do in the future, but would you be willing to add an AU where Pandora is in the rebellion and Damian is either part of the royal family or the royal gaurd/military? That would be amazing.

For the love of god please update my man

this story is really good. i love that im learning more about pandora, i used to think that she was just one of those typical female leads who gets the guy by showing him the "beautiful side of life" and bc she's "different from others" but so far, this story really has me addicted. i love that in some cases, it's pretty realistic. damian dabbled in some adolescent stuff, didn't realize he loved pandora right away, and the development of their relationhip took its time. what most people don't realize is that love isn't always all fireworks and attraction, sometimes its the strengthening of a bond over time and tbh for me, that idea is more preferrable bc its more solid and is almost impossible to break. even if you end up breaking away from that person (if you even can), they'll surely leave a mark on your life. what i really love about this story is damian and pandora's relationship. they know each other so well to the point they've basically become each other's half, it's a whole new level of soulmate and i absolutely adore it. i hope you continue on with this story, i'm always checking if it has a new update, their bond is so freakin' cute that it makes me jealouss

This is toothrooting stuff. I love xD
but seriously, this is a great Fanfiction. I didn't think that I would enjoy romance all that much, but this is great. You make it feel like this is something that could happen in the canon, in real life. Which is probably the goal for everyone who has an Oc.
Your writing is great too, really like how you describe things.
Excited to see the next chapter!

Raven is my favorite. Xoxo

Damian and Pandora are really good to each other. I love this eventual friends to lovers pair that will happen because I honestly can't picture Pandora in a relationship with Jason.