Oh, my apologies for bumping the review count but I do want to say this is a really well-written story so far! Everyone seems in character, Touma's bad luck is incredible as always and for once I'm reading a fan fiction where the author actually knows grammar! You've no idea how frustrating it is when you can barely read the thing but it still seems good! Anyway, good luck in your future stories!

You said this is going to contain LN spoilers, but up to where in the LN does it cover? I want to read it without being spoiled but I've just started the novels

I am a Saten/Frenda shipper who frowned upon the idea of this pairing, yet I chosed to read this fict simply due to curiousity. Needless to say, I am impressed. Good job.

This hurts my heart and yet fills me with so much satisfaction.
I will tell you that I truly do love this and will not forget it for a long time.
Yours truly, A Certain Weeping Chaoslord

Beautiful story. Loved it. Thank you for posting this work.

Wonderful story! Excellent!

Very good story. One of the anime scenes I like the most is in the God Eater anime, with the end of Onee-san. The end of this story brought that to mind, and it was executed quite well.

Here's a random idea that popped into my head while reading: the head damage from the first index incident undoes the head damage from the first Shokoho incident.

My feelz... 0_0

I actually had suspicious thins might be the case, but I considered other answers more viable. Guess I was wrong.

Wait. This Othinus has two eyes... And one of them is the same color as Rukio's eye. Rukio's MISSING eye.
I see what's going on, but I don't see WHY it's going on.

An eye patch? I know only one other character with an eye patch and she would be in a prime position to cause this kerfuffle. Ohh boy...

Whatever weird things are happening to Rukio they're clearly tied to the hetrochromatic girl. Even as far back as the sports festival, I recall a comment about Rukio's eye. And she's not capable of noticing anything... Some kind of mental suppression? Or the opposite, the weird thing is the effect, and she's the only one immune?

He's dead? Oh feck. This is going to cause ripples... Or at least prevent the ripples he caused from ever forming.
Without him, the 4th won't be held in check. This might cause problems later on.

Seeing that blond probably counts as magic, which would cause the internal damage Saten felt.

The POV transitions need a scene break.