| Reviews for Upon Return |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2018 Beautiful :) |
 azkabcn chapter 1 . 9/21/2015 Aww! This is so sweet! I love the 2nd person and future tense! It's beautiful! |
| Max Crimson chapter 1 . 7/16/2015 This made my heart ach at the begining. DX but got better in the feels department. XD over all, loved it! GREAT JOB! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! |
| christineisthename chapter 1 . 6/22/2015 Your words are simply beautiful... :) |
| Summerseve5375 chapter 1 . 3/1/2015 Really lovely story. Second person is a tricky style to nail and it gets tiresome in long stories. You judged the length perfectly and it was perfect for this story. |
| occasionallywrite chapter 1 . 2/23/2015 Beautiful! Your writing is incredible. |
| musicalgirl4474 chapter 1 . 2/22/2015 WOW! What feedback? That was amazing. |
| suchana.ghosh.58 chapter 1 . 2/22/2015 Nice,calming. |
| TheReturned chapter 1 . 2/20/2015 *applauds* You are too good at this. |
| eldell chapter 1 . 2/19/2015 Awww. This is beautiful! Quite the unusual writing style, too. It sounds like a prophecy and a promise at the same time. |
| SailOnSilvergirl chapter 1 . 2/18/2015 Powerful, beautiful writing! John's name sounding like gunshots...etc. - so full of raw emotion. It's the kind of sentence you want to read over and over. Other great phrasing: "You'll stare at the space over his shoulder" - yes! "Something resembling penitence" - perfect "You'll kiss him like his mouth is an altar" - lovely I'm astounded that more people haven't found your story. |
| mattsloved1 chapter 1 . 2/18/2015 This is truly beautiful. Thank you for sharing this piece with the rest of us! :-) |
| DaringD chapter 1 . 2/18/2015 I love this! Read it on AO3, too. Thanks for the suggestion. It's lovely! :-) |
| Resrie71 chapter 1 . 2/18/2015 This was wonderful. Have you written more? Please tell me you have written more! Clicking on your name to find out... |
| johnsarmylady chapter 1 . 2/18/2015 Absolutely perfect! Beautiful :) |
