It’s absolutely criminal how little reviews these masterpiece fan fictions get on this site while the “pErCy geTs bETrAyEd bY EVeRyoNE aND JoINs ChOAs pErTemIS” ones explode in popularity.

Your writing is simply amazing and I can’t get enough of your Percy Jackson fanfiction. You know how to craft a good story and make it compelling with incredible descriptions. The emotional and dramatic moments were masterfully written and were very impactful to us, the characters, and the narrative.

To be honest i loved this story. i have a tendency to not read story's that hurt me twice. Yet i love angst. And I can only read a story that made me a cry once. But whenever i stumble upon this I can't stop myself. I loved how you portrayed Annabeth's character. canon Annabeth is strong. Mentally. But here i got to see a whole new side of her. Struggling. Her break down. How she was never weak enough to die but not strong enough to stop herself from the self inflicting pain she caused. I wanted to see Annabeth this side for a long time. and you fulfilled my wish. Keep writing. And please write Percabeth more.

*belts out* I didn't ask to be a hero seeking praise~~~~~~~!

I loved this story! Really enjoyed the "blowup scene", with Percy seeing the ghost of Gabe. But I also love the smaller ones - Paul talking to Percy, Percy standing on the edge of the bridge and just looking, and even Annabeth cutting. You gave voice to all their issues, not just Tartarus, and I really, really appreciate that.

Very nice, I like the way you build the story so that it isn't just good en everything goes back to normal.

OH MY GOD this was SOOOOO amazing and the ending! Just wow! You are so talented! Please keep doing what you’re doing. You are so great at it.

Nice story. I like how it relates and adds up to the books. Great thinking.

Love the story! But I do wish you would have written a few more chapters. But I understand. Sometimes writers don't have enough time to write more. Anyway, still love the story! I love Percy Jackson!

This is the best PJO fanfic I ever read, thanks. I would like to read more stories of yours in the similar vein.

An extremely creative ending, though it still feels slightly inconclusive with what a major angst storm the story was.
I loved reading every chapter of this, but at every one I couldn'the help but think, "Where on earth are the others?"
Are they just hanging around like:
Leo: Hey guys, Percy's in the hospital
Frank:...
Piper:...
Hazel:...
Nico:...
Jason: Cool
It's not a complaint, but I noticed it. Any who, this was overall a really good story.

no way...THATS LEGIT THE BEST ENDING I HAVE EVER SEEN THIS STORY GIVES ME LIFE I LOVE YOU FOR CREATING THIS OMGGG

I have to say that this is by far one of the best endings I've ever read. As far as canons go, you've stuck to it and you made sure to have legitimate reasons for everything. This includes the relationship aspects of the entire story as they seem to be entirely realistic. Keep up the amazing work

The best representation of their mindsets on fan fiction, congratulations and well done with the story! I don't normally comment on stories, but. Well, I just had to.

This story is perfect!

This is an amazing story! I love your characterization!

I ABSOLUTELY loved it... Great work, I just have to say it again cause that's how amazing it was... I ABSOLUTELY loved it, like times million, you are truly a true author in training... Well Done