Why did you say earlier in the story that she was a bit chubby? I'm only an inch taller than her and the same weight and I'd say i'm pretty skinny, even though I've got some curves. I mean based on the information you gave, she seems like a size small in most clothes and that is definitely not chubby.

THIS is a really good fanfic! It actually made me cry. It was so real... like when you read it you can understand the characters emotions.
Keep the good work up! :)

Wow! Amazing!

Im trying to be very patient but I like your story very much and want mooooreee

The gun scene with Mudz was my favorite. Hilarious bullshit the loor bastard.

I dont think its a big deal if you don't wanna mess up Noodle and write her in a lot. Just cause you're writing a fanfic doesnt mean you need everyone in it all the time.

Please more more! UPDATE SOON OR ILL DIE!

Another lovely chapter! I like of thinking of Noble as Caucasion, more specifically full/part Hispanic, maybe even light skinned just because I get so tired of people thinking Hispanics/Mexicans are all brown/dark skinned. As far as face shape I guess I imagine heart shaped that's slightly rounded. And Noble wouldn't necessarily need to know Spanish, haha I could picture Murdoc being like "how do you say so and so in Spanish?" and Noble being like "why ask me I have no clue you dummy I didn't grow up learning it!"

aaaaaa idk hopefully some of that helps out haha

Although short, I still enjoyed this update! Poor Mudz is probably still pissing his pants haha

Anyways can't wait for the next update uwu

Great chapter!

Awesome :)

Aaaaaa I can totally see Murdoc reacting like this. Totally thinking he has the upper hand and then pissing his pants over it being flipped on him again and it being a super scary situation like the one in this chapter.

I can picture it effecting him so badly to the point where he gets super attached to the person or absolutely despising them for getting one over on him, probably a little of both haha

I love this so much! I hate how other fics deal with this topic and make it so black and white and put down anyone who had different experiences or someone who hasn't dealt with it.

I look forward to reading more about Noble!