Cute. I could do with a sequel to this. Couldn't write it but would definitely read it.

Yes, definitely going to be needing those wellies for tomorrow.

Mysterious spells, mysterious people, muggle tech, typical bloke language, Love It!

Loving your use of magical experimentation. It adds a dimension of imagination that was lacking from the original books.

Really loving the development of the Greengrass characters. Suspense is building... is it Robard? Greengrass?

This was a fun chapter to read. Enjoying the idea of Harry and Ron meeting as adults and their believable conversation. Intrigued to see where the Greengrass thread leads.

Loving the damaged grown up version of Harry and Ginny meeting.

Really enjoying the re-imagining of some of the characters. The banter between Harry and Dora is fun also.

sexy without being... undesirably bad. A fun bit of character build. Did find the bit about metamorphmagus a bit pedantic though.

Loving the flamboyant personality for Tonks. Good lead in, I'm hooked.

An intriguing beginning. Looking forward to the rest. The existence of a Department M in the ICW begs the question of why they didn't intervene with Voldemort though.

Thank you for this story. It was well written with lots of action, romance and plausible plot! It’s refreshing to read something complete and well written!

I enjoyed this story immensely.

As cool as the magic cop thing is I think the lethal weapon tv show handled the characters and the drama a thousand times better. It's hard to like this when I'm unconsciously holding it to the same standard as that.

I hope you turn up the dial on his coolness factor soon, and I don't mean with another wardrobe change. Frankly, it's a little laughable that the guy who just spent 4 years working as the wizarding equivalent to CIA operatives didn't realize he had talked to dozens of wizards or pick up on the fact that Tonks was observing them. It's also a little weird that he intends to keep a low profile but didn't do anything to hide his scar. I'd think he would be taught at least one method to do so, but more than likely you could infer he knows a couple since they did train him knowing full well the scar is a defining feature of someone well known.

As it is you already have him on the backfoot in a country he doesn't really know anymore with a cousin who's more than happy to tease and torment him after being fired from a job he wasn't suited for. Add in the above and I have to say he doesn't seem like an impressive person which truly is a shame, because again, he's the wizarding equivalent to CIA operatives and all those spy movies we love to watch. It's not something I usually pay attention to, but with this story it will live or die by how bad*ss Harry is imo.