If Will could see this I like to think he'd be the most disgusted. Since he gave his life for Arthur on Merlin behalf and having his best friend being hurt by the man he thought was better, Will wouldn't be happy.

I like that in many folklore it's said iron was a great way to reply magical spirits. It's why the horse shoe is seen as lucky since it was made of iron and said to protect the person holding the item. Very good idea in using a real world idea for an object of pain.

After all what happened I do not think Merlin should do anything for Arthur or Camelot. Everything is as if Magic needed to suffer to be allowed again, like Camelot was not the one that was guilty with Magic. Arthur needs to suffer in the same amounts as Merlin for the balance to be restored. There is no apology grand enough to balance out the suffering.

Man, I love this story and miss it when it's not updated in ages, can't wait till the next chapter :D

Please do not taint your story with comments about politics in America. Many don't agree with you, like myself, Since you haven't live as long as I have, you don't have the experiences that I do. You are relying on information passed to you from prejudicial sources. The news, for example, is not fair and unbiased, it represents the opinions of its owners. Blacks have made many strides since the Civil Rights movement...we have even elected one to the Presidency. Privilege is wealth, not race. My ancestors were serfs on Austrian fields. I was born poor with an alcoholic father, excuse me if I don't feel privileged.

More excitement! I can't wait until the next instalment!

Oh dear. Another step back for Merlin.
Thanks Ra1n.

Ah! This was such a great update!

So thrilled to see this update. My heart breaks for Merlin; his lack of progress so disheartening, but now that he has disappeared, what unspeakable things will happen to him? What will this fear do to him? Maybe Arthur will be the one to find him and be the only one that can help him? Too soon? Good grief, update soon, please.

I was surprised you updated so recently. Not a lot of authors that I've read have.

Anyway, this was really good! I enjoyed reading this. The only suggestion I'd make is to not have the f-word mentioned so much. It's just a suggestion and I was a little uncomfortable reading it. I think T doesn't have the f-word in it very much.

I enjoyed your story!

Keep Writing!
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Amazing chapter :D I can't wait till this story is finished... Only so I can read it all again :D

I just came across this and read it all at once, and wow. Im speechless. I love this story so much, and it is written so incredibly well. It is such a unique storyline that I could have never come up with and the amount emotions that are conveyed each chapter is unbelievable.
I hope you never stop updating this story.

Okay just wow
I marathoned this in like an hour and I have loved every second of it. This story is beautiful and haunting and emotional and so many other words that I can’t think of right now.
So thank you for taking the time to write and post this!

Oh my god you updated this fic! :D