I LOVE IT!

it was good just make it longer. Also make it more clear

Im crying. Waaaaaaaaaaa

Holy frijolí that was freaking cute

Practice is spelled with a c not an s. it is spelled worming and I am calling you out for it.e

I LOVE THIS

so CUTE

Hi I love the story, and just have one tiny comment. I'm trilingual(English, sign language for my deaf mother and twin younger brothers,and French because my brother raised us after my father died while my mum was pregnant with Brandon and Jason, and he was studying French in school and I helped him with his homework since was only one year younger.) and I noticed your 1 line Se il ya quelque chose que je en suis certain, que son,which you intended to mean "if there's anything I'm certain of it's that", actually means there is something I am sure that his, which is the exact translation and doesn't really make sense. I know I am writing this review two years later and you probably won't ever read this and don't care, but I just thought maybe you would since you told me to correct you in your AN.

AHHH THIS WAS SO CUTE AHHHHH! 3 COULD YOU MAKE A SEQUEL WITH JASON COMFERTING PIPER PLEASE?! 3 3

this was absolutely amazing

You used safe and sound by Taylor swift AND TOTALLY MADE ME HAPPY!

Oh. My. Gods. That was so emotional... I literally started to tear up and cry... Jasper is my OTP and seeing Jason so broken and Piper comforting him... That was... Just perfection...

I loooooooved this story so much! It was very cute! :)
I know you said in the author's note that you don't speak French and you google translated it, and I corrected that one line, If you're interested. :)
"Tu ne me ferais jamais du mal. Je le sais. S'il ya quelque chose ce dont je suis certaine, c'est ça."
And then when you say "I love you" it's "Je t'aime" not "Je te aime". It's basically the same thing, though. Just a little punctuation!

We should start a petition for a like button on fanfiction. Then again, i enjoy how ff never changes very much.

Oh my God, I love this story! Definitely under favorites! Jason's worry for Piper is pretty scary, but very good. He should be afraid of losing her, though she's very much capable on her own. Love this, love you!

-Penguin