you should make more of this

wow this is fucking good.

I loved the idea behind this story! It was so simple, but so great as something to write on. I feel that you captured how Touka would have felt very accurately, and how they argued and fought and made up; it was so wonderfully fiery. I have to say, though, that I found Kaneki to be a little strange. Asking to kiss her like that, even in light of their frustration - sexual or not - and the situation felt unsettling as I was reading. Other than that, however, I don't have much in the way of criticism.

I'll go stalk your profile now! Hope you have a lot of other work I can read :)
Happy writing!

Great!

Nice. Anyways update soon and keep up the good work.

You're a really good writer. I bet all the prompt-givers were really satisfied. ;)

Haha, I love how Nishiki's the hapless friend here caught in between Kaneki and Touka. Usually, he's portrayed as a tough character, so it's refreshing to see him from this perspective. And to know that he has some knowledge in placating angry females...

Thanks for writing!

I loved it :) So would you please be a doll and continue with the good work?

Omg you just made me fangirl really hard xD i really hope you write a full lemon tho but anyways good job I love it!