Reviews for Everdark
Kyubi1 chapter 31 . 2/1
Let her make a wish and make her happy, please!
Guest chapter 31 . 4/11/2019
To all fanfiction writers who sees this have you heard of the anime my roommate is a cat well I thought why don't you guys create fanfiction books about it and crossovers as well I thought why don't you create daily life and my roommate is a cat crossover books and instead of Higher Living with that story writer you can live with origami or Shido and his sister I thought since origami lives by herself and no parents and she never smiles what if she found Haru and things changed for her and for shido his sister story before kotori went to school or to her ship she found Haru by the streets decided to take her with her to the ship and decided to keep her with her brother's approval
Kyubi1 chapter 30 . 3/3/2019
Wow, thank you for that. I can see my ideas here, but also, I know that is your interpretation, so don't worry about stealing, because it was not, let's say that I was part of the inspiration?
I'm sorry for answering so late, I'm very busy with University and the Social Service, I don't have any free time at all, only on weekends.
It was very good, just like always, man.

:)
Hakuryuu chapter 27 . 10/22/2018
Nice chapter.
Bz7KP chapter 1 . 9/4/2018
Veri n1c3Obfst0riyf
3voDf chapter 1 . 9/4/2018
Veri n1c3mXfst0ricH
Hakuryuu chapter 22 . 8/16/2018
I liked the chapter, although it is hard to write about Mana every time this fact is better. You are also dealing well with their relationship, by the way the importance of Mana in the novels is growing but do not forget about Shido either.

Bye
Hakuryuu chapter 21 . 7/28/2018
I like your chapters, besides, what does it matter if they contradict each other? it is not a linear story, there are several poems, and each Kurumi clone, even if it is the same, sometimes thinks slightly different.

Anyway I like how you put the way of thinking of Mana because she is of fixed ideas and hard to convince them can change their minds, in that it looks like Kurumi as well as kill and fight for a goal, in reality the two They seem more than they would accept.
Sazuna chapter 16 . 4/13/2018
The Phi sentence at the end was just added because I was bored btw It would fit in other stories I wrote much better though but who knows... maybe this is a hint to something else?
DragonEX123 chapter 1 . 4/8/2018
I love Kurumi too, my friend, you're not the only one.
I love this poems, now you know it.
It will be in my community of date a live.
Kyubi1 chapter 2 . 4/7/2018
Hello, I'm Kyubi1 and I don't know a lot of english, bit here I go.

I don't know how to do poems, well... not like this, I think is good, very good, even if I only read one, this one. I can feel your love for Kurumi, I like her but maybe I never be able to make poems like this.

Keep the hard work, I will read the rest of them.

I would like to translate your poems to spanish, the credit will be yours, of course. I think more people would like to read this, you know, people who cannot understand english. Can I translate your work for those people? Please, let me know, I don't want to steal your work or anything, that's why I'm asking you.

Greetings, Kyubi1.
Senpai2342 chapter 14 . 1/30/2018
Yeah, fakk logic!
Sazuna chapter 12 . 12/4/2016
Didn't really notice until yet that I can write comments under my own story lol Is this new? Maybe I will use it for something useful in the future. (actively answering reviews in my own story instead of pming f.e.)

Anyway... Have a nice day people
XGospelz chapter 6 . 8/20/2016
One of my favourites! Great job on making these poems mate!
ThisIsDefinitelyNotAShortName chapter 8 . 12/11/2015
Shit, I typed "wall" instead of "all"
Enough LoL for today...
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