Ahhhhhhh! THis is fantastic! Please update!

Squeeeeeeeeeeeeee! XD XD
This was soooooooooooo good! Please please please please please please 1000000x please continue this! It's fantastic! I'm a ginormous Petris shipper and this is a really ideal fanfiction! I BEG YOU CONTINUE IT I WILL DO ANYTHING PLEASE IF YOU LOVE DIVERGENT CONTINUE IT! Plus you're writing skills are brilliant AND you have like zero grammer mistakes (What? What do you mean I spelt grammer wrong?! How dare you?! What're you talking about: "it's spelt grammar"? Who do you think you are?! Peter, hand me my butter knife!)
Hehe sorry got a bit carried away there :P
Anyhoo, please update :D xxxx

are you going to finish this? its lovely

This was awesome! Please make more if you can. :)

This is really good! Update soon!

LOVE this. So promising. Your Peter is written really accurately for this au, I love your characterization :)

please, update soon! I hope you continue this fic! I love Peter/Tris!

Awesome so far, with an original premise and well-written interactions. Please update!

Loving this! Always nice to see a new Petris out there!

UPDATEEEE!

this is very soild I love petris and I can't wait till you update

This is a good start! I look forward to reading more...

Ok I really like this so far!

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This is some solid stuff you've got here! You're a little heavy handed with the commas (they're unnecessary in a lot of places) but I like the plot and where you're headed. Peter's dialogue is slightly out of character, and I frankly can't picture Tris ever writing a note like that. But I'm intrigued, and you're leagues ahead of most Peter/Tris writers here.

Let me know if you need a Beta! I'd be more than happy to help you out :)
xx Nina