Reviews for Demigoddess in a Wizarding World |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this until you changed her from Poseidon's daughter into a Potter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() you know, in Spanish if we switch the c with an s in Perciana, it would mean curtain |
![]() ![]() ![]() great job. it's Manhattan, NY not Massachusetts (it's a completely different place) and one thing to improve is to add line breaks or something similar when you chance the focus of the story. can't wait to read what comes next, and what things are changed from the original. keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't find the sequel... |
![]() ![]() LOVE it so far! Very unique! I have never read a crossover (and boy have I read many) with Percy in a different grade than Harry and Hermione, having a double life, and being friends with Fred and George! Nice spin on your story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... RON! Okay, Jason and Nico I can understand. KAWAII~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Andrew! :D Thanks for this chapter and yes, we all hate Skeeter. |
![]() ![]() I don't think the demigods really need to stay in hogwarts otherwise it just becomes stereotypical |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG I love this story thank you for making a second one yay |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think that they should stay. It could widen the plot a little. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This...this...this...is...so...AWESOME! Update soon |
![]() ![]() That's not hell, that's kinky. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hee, I thought there would be telly in hell. Dreadful, repetitive telly. But telly, nonetheless. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well. Damn. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Err... her fear is... unexpected. I mean, Molly saw her family dead, because that's what she was most scared of. Or, well, how to say this? How can Gabe be Percy's fear after the Titanomancy? Wouldn't it be Annabeth and Nico and Grover dead? Or perhaps Luke possessed by Kronos? Typhoon even. Or Poseidon's dissapointed face. Seriously. After the first quest, the fat bastard didn't mean much to Percy in cannon, and after the war, I don't understand how he's still her boogeyman. There are so many choices in her PSTD-full head. It makes me wonder about the backstory... seriously wonder (inching forward in my chair with a 'I-want-to-know-right-NOW' expression of menace-kind of wonder) |