Can you make a Lyanna/Cersei/Elia friendship. Something that will look like the Rhaella/Joanna/Princess of Dorne friendship.

Write more soon please.

Hasta aqui llega?

bashing bobby b? sad.

First I want to say that your story is very good, I think you should get a beta reader for the grammar issues but I find that If the story is good grammar isn’t as important, second can’t just say the Bolton thing didn’t happen you have to actually write it in, you’ll have to change the chapter. Also Stannis killed reply for the exact same thing Robert is doing now so I feel like he shouldn’t be
supporting Robert at all. Also i think you should know that kings Landing rules over a large area called the crown lands where the king would be able to raise his own army so I feel you should include them in the group against Robert. The iron islands would definitely take advantage of this rebellion it’s exactly what they did after the actual rebellion form the books. Also I feel you should know that Dorne actually had a very good relationship with the Targeryens and fought for them in the actual rebellion from the books.

PS. I’m not sure if it’s this story were it was stated that the Targeryens never married outside the family but that’s false they actually married with the Martells quite often and other families on occasion, marriage to the Martells is what brought them into the seven kingdoms officially they were a separate kingdom before that.

future plot twist : cersei's first kid is jamie's bastard

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I hope Robert dies.. Ugh.. I feel so bad for Lyanna..

The Boltons declaring that they are siding with Robert makes no sense, first of all most of the realm is against Robert, second the Boltons are still in the North, they have no ships and their only way south is to march through the North which they just declared they would stand against, the Boltons will be easily killed quickly in this scenario, there is chance here that the Bolton bannermen wouldn't not only side with Roose but would turn on him in a second after this Madness, Even with all his Men Roose Bolton isn't even the 2nd strongest house in the North, thats the Manderlay's, so unless Roose had marched as many men as he could get south months ago and gave up up of defending the dreadfort then he has basically committed suicide.

Robert is mad and stupid

Never in my life would I thought I'd ship Ned and Cersei. And here we are now. They kind of my otp in this fanfic. Great job!

What about the Greyjoys and Tyrells? They might prove a wildcard as they don't have any connections to Rhaegar and the Greyjoys might rebel to regain their independence while the Tyrells might ally with Robert in a bid to gain power? At the very least, them allying with Robert (or staying neutral) might make his revolt less of a curbstomp by the Loyalists.

I'm quite happy you've resumed writing this story. Please keep it up. It's interesting so far.

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It would not be called "Ward." It would be "Lord Paramount." I think you are confusing the title with "Warden," which is given to the four cardinal houses.