This is just too cute XD

I've read quite a few Spike and Ralph stories, but this was one of the best so far. I loved it! And you really stayed in character!

That was heart touching and adorable! You brought out the soft side of Raphael in an instant!

Nice!

This was really good! i am a sucker for brother moments.

Awwwww! I love spike! This is an adorable fanfic! Thanks Gwydian

Aaaaawe! You write Raph perfectly! I had to laugh at the part about Mikey naming him slash! Ha! Well done, as always.

This was incredibly cute. This was a very enjoyable fic and I loved seeing little Raph worry over another creature. You displayed his soft side very well. This was definitely a cute, but interesting take on how Raph possibly found Spike. Great Job .

I should try an exercise like this! It has truly gotten you to write some amazing stuff. You did SO WELL with little Raph in this.

Yay! More Donnie and Raph! These two need to interact more in the show! Heck, EVERYONE needs to interact more in the show. EVERYONE, LOVE EACH OTHER! DANG, I LOVE THESE TURTLES AND THEIR RELATIONSHIPS WITH THEIR BROS!

Aww a Spike origin story. I always wondered how he came to live with them as Raph's pet. And it's great to see some Donnie and Raph bonding moments.

I'm enjoying you're little one shot exercise.

I have this nagging feeling that you really like Raph's relationship with Spike. :) Well, regardless, you do it very well! Its all so cute and adorable and Raphael just has a lot of feelings!

Great job! I really enjoy your stuff!

DragonflyonBreak

Awww. That's beautiful, and sad.